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Untitled Continued

April 20, 2010
By Anonymous

So when I said the heart stopped beating
I didn’t mean it true
The world around me was falling apart
Cause I knew I couldn’t have you
See I wanted you so badly
I’d believe just anything
Like when you sang your songs
To me you would sing
Like your music was the only rhythm
That helped keep me alive
Like I needed your every moment
To help my heart survive
But I had to learn the hard way
There really was no true beat
My heart was only praying to God
For the sound of baby pattering feet
But lying to my heart
Would only cause me more pain
Cause my heart was a ticking time bomb
Slowly going insane


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on May. 15 2010 at 10:11 am
Natherine PLATINUM, Lawrence, Massachusetts
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Favorite Quote:
"everything happens for a a reason "

iLoveeitttt I can so relatee 

Hope yuh can chekkk my poems out and lmk wat yuh think :) 


on May. 10 2010 at 2:28 pm
lookin4love SILVER, Snellville, Georgia
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Favorite Quote:
"Some of us think holding on makes us strong; but sometimes it is letting go."
~ Heman Hesse

"There’s no need to miss someone from your past. There’s a reason they didn’t make it to your future."
~ Unknown

thanks i guess... yes i was restless cuase this is based on a real situation... but im not desperate

AshleyW BRONZE said...
on May. 10 2010 at 9:36 am
AshleyW BRONZE, Bend, Oregon
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This captures the restlessness and desperation very accurately