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Here on my own,
Slowly turning to stone,
Losing my mind,
Forgetting to find,
The small, lost,
Heart I tossed,
To try and forget,
The one I falsely loved, yet,
I know I need to forget,
But I feel I need yet,
To remember her shallow,
Cold, hardened, not mellow,
So I can not make,
The same mistake,
Of falling in love,
With a cold blooded dove.





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Jazzzy517 said...
May 12, 2010 at 12:34 pm
you are so talented! its really hard for me to explain these emotions, but ou did it perfectly.
 
Metree This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
May 12, 2010 at 10:35 am
this was really good and beautifully rhymed :)
 
Egyptiangirl13 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
May 10, 2010 at 5:48 pm
That was the best lovesick peom i've ever read-can't wait to read more!
 
BiancaMarie said...
May 10, 2010 at 10:44 am
this is by farr the bestt poem thatt i have read! :D i lovee it hunn! you deff. should keep wrightingg. comment mine and ratee tell me whatt you thinkk (: plz and thanxxx ! <3<3 xoxoxo
 
Miseltoe said...
May 7, 2010 at 5:50 pm
Its interesting the feelings behind the surface. Sometimes its hard giving up the things we are so familiar to. I remember how much my heart ached when I ended it until I saw how much his feelings for me were a lie
 
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