Hidden Feelings

April 20, 2010
By , columbia, SC
There's a girl
Who is secretly
In love, her secret
Being she can't tell
Why? They'd all laugh
And be shocked. The
Boy well he'd never
Give her a second look
She's all confused and
All mixed up. Why does
She feel this way?
All she knows is when
She's with him, she's free.
Free to be who she is
And to be happy.
She just wants to be
With him, to be able to
Tell him how she feels
For him to feel the way
She does
But she'll never be able
To express her love, she'll
Shelter it in her heart for
I've loved him for so long...

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ChocolateBliss said...
May 10, 2010 at 10:42 pm
absolutely amazing. I can definitely relate to this poem, through a recent experience, which im still currently facing.
BiancaMarie said...
May 10, 2010 at 10:35 am

awwwwwww! :D i lovee itt hunn! keep writingg! (:

comment mine and votee plzzz(;

Egyptiangirl13 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
May 9, 2010 at 8:39 pm
that was really good i loved it!!!! Awesome
~simplyjasmine~ said...
May 9, 2010 at 8:00 pm
thats really good!!
weepingwillowfaire said...
May 8, 2010 at 11:44 pm
i also liked how u switched it to 1st person. i love the poem it has a lot of emostion
jonas_chick899 said...
May 7, 2010 at 9:24 pm
awww <333 i liked how u switched to 1st person in the end...
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