Stuck In the Middle

By , Albuquerque, NM
Stuck in the middle
With no happy fiddle
Asked to take sides
With care for both
But I am stuck in the middle

No place to run
Must face it straight on
Two great places to go
Only one to choose
Stuck in the middle

People separating all the time
Must unite to conquer all
But we run forever
Must face it head on
But I am stuck in the middle





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mysterywriter2012 said...
May 11, 2010 at 7:24 pm
i like the picure and it fits the poem. The leaf is sort of stuck in the middle
 
Ashee97 said...
May 11, 2010 at 5:41 pm
Right on! This poem is awesome! So youre a first time writer? Well this rocks! I really like it, it makes a lot of sense and im sure almost anyone can relate to it, which makes it easier to understand. Keep up the *EXCELLENT* work!! Youre doing a *GREAT* job! :)  Waayyy better than what i could have done. Im so proud of you!! You are so talented. Keep on writing those amazing poems, you could really be a great famous poet someday i think! :)
 
Felicia said...
May 10, 2010 at 11:53 am
for the first poem you ever wrote this is really good. several people can relate to it wether it be parents or friends
 
BiancaMarie said...
May 10, 2010 at 10:33 am

i think we cann all relate to this poem because at one point in our lives we have been stuck in the middle of something. andd it sucks! greatt jobb hunn!

comment somee of minee and ratee themm plzz and thankss sweetyyy (:

 
AshleyW said...
May 10, 2010 at 9:55 am
I like the repition of "stuck in the middle"
 
ilovebooks1221 said...
May 9, 2010 at 4:17 pm
I thought it was a good poem, but it was trying too hard to be poetic. It's a good start, though, and do keep writing.
 
perfected_11 said...
May 8, 2010 at 9:55 am

it's hard choosing sides but we must find a solution.

good poem!

can u rate mine 2?

TeenInk.com/poetry/free_verse/article/199194/The-Way-I-Go/

 
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