Heart Break

April 20, 2010
By ♠♣♦♥Jon♠♣♦♥ SILVER, Albuquerque, New Mexico
♠♣♦♥Jon♠♣♦♥ SILVER, Albuquerque, New Mexico
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Favorite Quote:
" The greatest things in life are unseen, Thats why we close our eyes when we cry, kiss, and dream."


Heart break
I feel so cold; and empty
Your touch was the warmth of me,
Disappearing slowly; as I fade away.
Memories glow like fire flies at night,
Never ever leaving my sight; forever.
You touched me; like an angel from above,
Brightening me; with each and every hug.
The tears slowly trickle down the side,
It’s noticeable; with no way to hide it.
I stay quiet; hoping no one will ask,
See this smile, it’s only fake.
Feelings grow; but quickly decrease.
You left me lifeless; with no room to breath.
There’s no fix; to this horrifying pain.
The more aches; the more breaks,
And I’m all alone; maintaining this heart break.


The author's comments:
This was from expierence, and I just felt the need to get it out on paper. And therefore I came up with this poem.

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shortiee said...
on May. 17 2011 at 5:51 pm
I just loved this poem because this is how i feel right now u did a really good job with this poem !

renni SILVER said...
on May. 12 2010 at 8:17 pm
renni SILVER, Crete, Illinois
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Favorite Quote:
Sometimes, that girl who seems so strong, who never lets what people say bother her, who smiles and laughs with her friends all the time, is really the girl who, deep down, is falling to pieces.

this is so amazing !!!! i love how you write poetry its amazing :)

on May. 12 2010 at 4:54 pm
Army.Strong SILVER, Twinsburg, Ohio
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Favorite Quote:
"God is great, beer is good and people are crazy"
"Honor, Respect, Bravery; U.S. Navy"
"Have High Winds" -U.S. Navy

this is amazing. I love every bit of it. :)

Metree SILVER said...
on May. 12 2010 at 10:32 am
Metree SILVER, Machipongo, Virginia
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wow this is so good! I love your writing style :)

on May. 11 2010 at 9:33 pm
inspire.identity. PLATINUM, Ajax, Other
23 articles 8 photos 98 comments
i love this ! 

k.james SILVER said...
on May. 11 2010 at 8:24 pm
k.james SILVER, Whitby, Other
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Favorite Quote:
"Love without action is meaningless, action without love is irrelevant." -Deepak Chopra

i'm going through some right now and trust me itz not fun :( but your right life does go on :) btw could you read some of my stuff i would love your comments about it. <3

k.james SILVER said...
on May. 11 2010 at 8:20 pm
k.james SILVER, Whitby, Other
5 articles 0 photos 110 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Love without action is meaningless, action without love is irrelevant." -Deepak Chopra

Love it!!!!

on May. 11 2010 at 7:25 pm
mysterywriter11 GOLD, Dickson, Tennessee
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Favorite Quote:
Reach for the moon, even if you miss, you'll land among the stars. ♥ ♫♪♫♪♫♪
"believe in your dreams, no matter how small or big they are, you might just be surprised... "

i can totally relate ;)

phillies26 said...
on May. 11 2010 at 2:22 pm
phillies26, Christana, Pennsylvania
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Favorite Quote:
"Never go to bed angry, stay up and plot your revenge."

that was soooo good n i can relate to this cuz i had my heart broken 4 times already!!!! HUH......  :( but hey life goes on right?

sad_gurl said...
on May. 11 2010 at 1:37 pm
i can definatley relate to this if u colud ever write what somone could feel when goin through crap u did! great job!

on May. 10 2010 at 9:42 pm
ashleykayy. BRONZE, Westmont, Illinois
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Favorite Quote:
its not what you look at that matters, its what you see.

henry david thoreau

if someone could capture a heart break in words this would describe the feelings :) keep writing.

HelloLove said...
on May. 10 2010 at 4:02 pm
HelloLove, Dexter, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
Twinkle, twinkle, little bat! How I wonder what you're at.
-Hatter
Tut, tut, child! Everything's got a moral, if only you can find it.
-Dutchess

Very well written, So deep.

on May. 10 2010 at 12:14 pm
wow this poem was really good i liked it two thumbs up :)

ccxisleet GOLD said...
on May. 10 2010 at 12:08 pm
ccxisleet GOLD, Big Lake, Minnesota
15 articles 0 photos 15 comments

Favorite Quote:
"To be one's self, is to be truly honest, truly loyal, and truly great."

Good job with the poem, I feel I can relate very well with that portrayal of your feelings.

on May. 10 2010 at 12:04 pm
Valerie1234 GOLD, Whitmore Lake, Michigan
17 articles 0 photos 13 comments

Favorite Quote:
"It is better to have loved and lost then to have never loved at all"

This is realllyy GOOD! I love it! I know that exact feeling, although i've moved on from that guy who broke my heart a million times, and am with a different great guy. I know this feeling and it really sucks...But this is a beautiful poem! i also right poetry, kinda about the same things.

on May. 9 2010 at 8:54 pm
Egyptiangirl13 GOLD, Kansas City, Missouri
14 articles 0 photos 501 comments

Favorite Quote:
\"either write something worth reading or do something worth writing. -Benjamin Franklin

\"If columbus would have turned back, no one would have blamed him. No one would have remembered him either.\"

\"If music be the food of love, play on.\"

exactly!! i could feel the emotion and thought that you put behind it. Beautiful!!!

on May. 8 2010 at 11:38 pm
sammie1997 GOLD, Winslow, Maine
17 articles 0 photos 15 comments

Favorite Quote:
never say goodbye
because goodbye means leaving
and leaving means forgetting
-petter pan

I feel exactly that way RIGHT now! it sucks... ur poem describes the feelings so well... it is almost scary! please if u have some time check out my poems and leave a comment to something i can do better to make mine awesome like yours is!

on May. 8 2010 at 11:33 pm
weepingwillowfaire GOLD, Mesa, Arizona
13 articles 0 photos 2 comments

Favorite Quote:
"bite me"

i love ur poem it also shows how i feel there is so much emostions in it.

on May. 8 2010 at 6:41 pm
oh my gosh this is exactly what i feel like its is beautifully written and you did a great job.. :)

on May. 8 2010 at 1:01 pm
jessica.cherish.conner GOLD, Elk Grove, California
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This is so touching, and really well-written.(:


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