decisions

By , Dearborn, MI
Why do I always sit and think?
About the world, you and me?
What am I supposed to be?
A beautiful person?
or something ugly?
I run too much, it's time to stay
Not delay
I can be whatever I choose
Yet i'm filled up with booze
I need strength to succeed
Or else I'll start to bleed





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BoosflashThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
May 10, 2010 at 9:53 am
I like this poem and I really like the ending-please write more or else I'll start to bleed:j
 
timevampire This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
May 10, 2010 at 12:50 pm
plug the wound with words.
 
BoosflashThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
May 10, 2010 at 3:36 pm
you know what-Imma write something and dedicate it to you..................
 
timevampire This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
May 10, 2010 at 6:00 pm
sweet. that's what I'm talkin' about! :)
 
Quotes_on_Notebooks said...
May 8, 2010 at 12:20 pm
i love this. it's very powerful and very moving. you did a great job! you're really talented! if you have time, please check out some of my work
 
LaurenC replied...
May 8, 2010 at 9:09 pm
Well thank you:) I wrote it when I was kind of down. & I definitely will! :D
 
timevampire This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
May 8, 2010 at 11:16 am

I like this :) maybe you can look at some of my stuff.


 
LaurenC replied...
May 8, 2010 at 9:09 pm

Thank you!:) 

& I will :D 

I'll give you some feedback also:x

 
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