Just Waiting

April 18, 2010
hat is this life
We live?
The wait between birth and
Years and years of
Living, waiting
What is the difference between life
and death, when do we declare
Someone dead?
When they're not breathing on
They're own?
Their heart not beating?
Not thinking?
Such a small line between
Being alive and
Being dead
It's almost like it doesn't matter;
Everyone is unique and special, yet
There are millions, billions of
We cannot all be special.

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kenna2013 said...
Jun. 18, 2010 at 6:42 pm
I think this was very good . . . It was realistic and yes sometimes reality is depressing
MissFaber said...
May 26, 2010 at 7:03 pm
I can see why some would say this is depressing, but honestly I just think it's realistic. I loved the message this poem sent
BoosflashThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
May 10, 2010 at 10:43 am
I love this poem and I love the last line-we cannot all be special. its not depressing, -V- its just the truth that no one wants to hear:[
Jade-McKaye said...
May 7, 2010 at 1:11 pm
that is a really depressing thought...
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