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In Dreams

April 18, 2010
By sparkofheart GOLD, Plymouth, Minnesota
sparkofheart GOLD, Plymouth, Minnesota
16 articles 2 photos 253 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Always" - Severus Snape


When lights extinguish at night,
and I'm lounging lazily on the mattress,
slowly sinking into sleepy stupor,
my thoughts are willingly thrown out to you,
dozing in bed; sheets draped over your torso so snug,
and your hair ruffled wildly on the pillow.


Perhaps you're well into a breath-taking dream,
and your eyelids flicker with anticipation
as a smile plays on lips soft as petals from a rose.
How I long to marvel upon your intoxicating beauty;
a feast for my eyes as I steadily drink you in.


And how I wish I could join you,
wiggling closer to your blazing warmth
as a few strands of my hair float out to graze your chest.
And when you breathe sweet nothings in my ear,
I drift away on a cloud as your musky scent fills the evening
And I feel lust in the pressure of your hands twisted in mine,
tangled so tight they could never unfurl.


But something in the distance tries to tug me away.
And when I grasp you even tighter, your eyes meet mine,
and my blood sets fire as my heart smolders.
Our lips nearly brush as you lean in so close it dizzies me.
You whisper, "go now," in a voice that brings envy to the angels,
and I'm shoved back to reality by my blaring alarm.


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on Apr. 13 2011 at 10:22 pm
sparkofheart GOLD, Plymouth, Minnesota
16 articles 2 photos 253 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Always" - Severus Snape

hey thanks! (sorry for the insanely late response btw i just havent been writing too much lately)

on Sep. 16 2010 at 4:50 pm
Youth.of.the.Nation SILVER, Loveland, Colorado
9 articles 2 photos 4 comments

Favorite Quote:
"What we do for ourselves dies with us. What we do for others, and the world, remains and is, immortal." -Albert Pine

You are an absolutely amazing writer!! The more I read the more i can relate- and trust me when I tell you telling this person would be worth it!! Keep up the good- no, FANTASTIC work!!!

on Jul. 2 2010 at 10:41 pm
sparkofheart GOLD, Plymouth, Minnesota
16 articles 2 photos 253 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Always" - Severus Snape

im glad i could relate :) thanks!

Jessip GOLD said...
on Jun. 20 2010 at 9:08 pm
Jessip GOLD, Minot, North Dakota
14 articles 0 photos 12 comments
The more I read from you, the more I get drawn in, You really are very very good. I love this peice, it reminds me of my own love I think about before bed.

on Jun. 1 2010 at 3:52 pm
sparkofheart GOLD, Plymouth, Minnesota
16 articles 2 photos 253 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Always" - Severus Snape

wow thank you! i dont really think im writer potential but ill keep that in mind :)

on Jun. 1 2010 at 2:43 pm
FreakShow818 PLATINUM, Longmont, Colorado
23 articles 15 photos 33 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Never Let The Fear OF Striking Out Keep You From Playing The Game."

:) Keep this up! Man is it amazing! You seriously could be a writer with this kind of talent!

on May. 30 2010 at 6:22 pm
sparkofheart GOLD, Plymouth, Minnesota
16 articles 2 photos 253 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Always" - Severus Snape

thanks!!!!! that totally made my day haha its great that you loved it so much

on May. 27 2010 at 1:16 pm
FreakShow818 PLATINUM, Longmont, Colorado
23 articles 15 photos 33 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Never Let The Fear OF Striking Out Keep You From Playing The Game."

Oh my gosh. This one had me begging for more. I looooovvvveeee ittttttt!!!!!!!!!!!

on May. 7 2010 at 3:33 pm
sparkofheart GOLD, Plymouth, Minnesota
16 articles 2 photos 253 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Always" - Severus Snape

thank you! :)

on May. 7 2010 at 1:15 pm
Jade-McKaye SILVER, West Jordan, Utah
9 articles 0 photos 37 comments

Favorite Quote:
what happened to a dream?

this is so beautifully amazing, i cant even descibe it, i love it!!<3