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tears here
tears their
tears shatter everywhere
its not raining
but everythings wet
cant predict the future
but my futures set
beneath a river
ill die
knowing i drowned myself in cries




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poetry_addict said...
Jun. 16, 2010 at 11:37 am:
love it super deep plz check out sum of my stuff
 
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WhiteBear said...
Jun. 15, 2010 at 3:08 pm:
very good, lots of emotion and description. Good job! ;)
 
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Brandon3607 said...
Jun. 3, 2010 at 7:08 pm:

Wow THAT is GOOD :)

 

 
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Paulina49 said...
Jun. 2, 2010 at 3:44 pm:
This is a short poem, but it is so deep! Keep it up!!
 
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BoosflashThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
May 10, 2010 at 10:59 am:
very nice." I'll die here and it'll be all my fault so please dont feel sorry for me. oh look here come my tears,I guess I'll drown now." I love that.
 
janette93 replied...
May 29, 2010 at 6:42 pm :
haha thanks :)
 
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