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tears everywhere

April 18, 2010
By janette93 BRONZE, Bell Canyon, California
janette93 BRONZE, Bell Canyon, California
4 articles 0 photos 6 comments

Favorite Quote:
treat others the way you would want to be treated


tears here
tears their
tears shatter everywhere
its not raining
but everythings wet
cant predict the future
but my futures set
beneath a river
ill die
knowing i drowned myself in cries



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on Jun. 16 2010 at 11:37 am
love it super deep plz check out sum of my stuff

on Jun. 15 2010 at 3:08 pm
WhiteBear SILVER, Beckenham, Kent, Other
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Darkness cannot drive out darkness, only light can do that. Hate cannot drive out hate, only love can do that.

very good, lots of emotion and description. Good job! ;)

on Jun. 3 2010 at 7:08 pm
Brandon3607 GOLD, Lemoore, California
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Wow THAT is GOOD :)

 


on Jun. 2 2010 at 3:44 pm
Paulina45 SILVER, El Paso, Texas
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\\\"What a romance this is with no kisses, my friend, what a romance this is.\\\"

This is a short poem, but it is so deep! Keep it up!!

on May. 29 2010 at 6:42 pm
janette93 BRONZE, Bell Canyon, California
4 articles 0 photos 6 comments

Favorite Quote:
treat others the way you would want to be treated

haha thanks :)

on May. 10 2010 at 10:59 am
Boosflash DIAMOND, Jacksonville, Florida
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Get, Got, Gotten.

very nice." I'll die here and it'll be all my fault so please dont feel sorry for me. oh look here come my tears,I guess I'll drown now." I love that.


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