Rain Drops

Tiny droplets splash the ground,
Meeting the pavement with a tiny sound,
But all together they sing to the skies,
As they fall from a crying cloud’s eyes.

They beg for the clouds to stop their tears,
Sadly clouds do not have ears,
And so they didn’t hear the raindrops pleas,
Their unheard screaming for mercy.

So the tears continue sliding,
Dripping as the clouds keep crying,
Falling to their inevitable death,
Sucking in their one last breath.

But for the raindrops it is too late,
The poor little droplets have reached their fate.
Life and death in a matter of seconds,
It was destiny, or so god reckons.





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Drizzle29 said...
Sept. 11, 2010 at 11:30 am

this was by faaaaar my favorite poem of yours! i love it! it flows so nicely and even if you didn't originally write it as a metaphor, i perceived it as one! :D

amazing job!

 
Amiee said...
Sept. 11, 2010 at 9:20 am
Jackie! you rock at writing! (omg, i'm really sorry, everyone was writing "jackie", "jackie" so i was like....oh....her name's Jackie) i really think this is good, but sometimes i think it repeats the same idea over and over again, but that might be poetic too, depending on how you look at it~
 
elfiewrites said...
May 6, 2010 at 7:21 pm
Awwhh!! Jackie, you are amazing. I never knew that you wrote so well. Did I mention that this is amazing? Welcome to Teen Ink. Keep on writing!! <3
 
butterflyluvr said...
May 6, 2010 at 4:07 pm
this poem is soooo good jackie!!!!!
 
lunaluv said...
May 6, 2010 at 3:10 pm
jackie this is ahmazingg !!! keep writing !!!
 
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