Never stop

By Kirthi, Marietta, GA

You've run away
expecting me to
find you
And I will.
I'll follow you
until the
sun illuminates
the starry
midnight sky.
Until the moon
and the sun
slumber together
Until the stars
dance on the clouds
Until I reach
the edge of Earth
I'll never stop
looking for you

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MaKayla1513 said...
Aug. 10, 2010 at 6:46 pm:

I have a new story out called Im just going to end it all check it out when you get a chance! Comment and rate it for me

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Stargirl212 said...
Jun. 24, 2010 at 3:51 pm:

THIS.IS.MY.FAVORITE!!!! I love it Kirthi! Way to go! :)

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ashleycsy_09 said...
Jun. 13, 2010 at 6:23 pm:

Wow! This is amazing! I would have never guessed you were thirteen if you did not say so on your blog.

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ashleycsy_09 said...
Jun. 13, 2010 at 6:21 pm:

Look forward to using this site!

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MaKayla1513 said...
Jun. 5, 2010 at 10:32 am:

this is godd! You should have made it a little longer, but good! I have some new stories out that you should take a look at when you have a min! =)

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Mandy said...
May 25, 2010 at 5:48 pm:

This is a beautiful poem (:

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xicecreamsjx said...
May 24, 2010 at 8:57 pm:

i like this poem! i enjoy your word choice :)

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Mrs. DeRaps said...
May 24, 2010 at 7:45 pm:

I can tell that you were inspired by nature to write this poem. There are a lot of nature-related images in this poem. I would love to see this poem illustrated.

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DENIZ said...
May 6, 2010 at 7:53 pm:

I have to agree with Sam-Y.

I love this one, too.

Such delicate chosen words . . . .

I must say . . . . you did a fine job.

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sillysami said...
May 6, 2010 at 4:06 pm:

OMG THIS IS MY FAV.!!!!!!!!!!!! kirthi u r an awsome wrighter! and u think outside the box. + this has a HUGE message to it.