Report Abuse Home > Poetry > Free Verse > Just behave Just behave By DaylightDarkness, Littleton, CO More by this author Sing no songs Play no games Dance no dances Make no music -Quiet- Please children, just behave (break away) « Previous article More by this author Next article » Join the Discussion This article has 8 comments. Post your own! Report abuse Hazel-daisy said... Jul. 28, 2011 at 7:34 pm: i'm not sure i like it, i just think the end is a bit of a dead beat but thats just me, i hope i'm not too harsh because i do like your pieces! :) Report abuse Delictious said... Jul. 23, 2011 at 10:35 am: It's a great concept. A lot of people I bet, especially on this website, can relate to it! It's short and sweet, very easy to read but it leaves you with so much more than just a few lines of a poem. You pack a lot of emotion into only 8 lines, which is very nice! Good job! Report abuse Alon_Freevoice said... Jul. 22, 2011 at 10:52 pm: Maybe, movements is better than dances in the 4th line. But it's just me, so...This poem is good - short and easy to read... Keep it up :) Report abuse CarrieAnn13 said... Jul. 22, 2011 at 10:45 pm: Short and sweet! It's a nice poem, saying how kids aren't supposed to have fun. Report abuse Anagam said... Jul. 19, 2011 at 7:43 pm: i like it! it's true. so much poer in a few lines. I could hear crickets chirping in the silence part. you know how this made me feel? I don't behave. haha. Good job! Report abuse Egyptiangirl13 said... May 11, 2010 at 8:18 pm: I agree, so much meaning in so little lines!!! Its like God telling us to behave and stop being so selfish!!! Report abuse reillysmiley22 said... May 11, 2010 at 4:07 pm: as short as it is, this poem is so powerful, i really like it DaylightDarkness replied... May 11, 2010 at 5:23 pm : Thank you very much.