Just behave

April 17, 2010
Tell no stories
Sing no songs
Play no games
Dance no dances
Make no music
Please children, just behave

(break away)

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Hazel-daisy This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jul. 28, 2011 at 7:34 pm
i'm not sure i like it, i just think the end is a bit of a dead beat but thats just me, i hope i'm not too harsh because i do like your pieces! :)
Delictious said...
Jul. 23, 2011 at 10:35 am
It's a great concept. A lot of people I bet, especially on this website, can relate to it! It's short and sweet, very easy to read but it leaves you with so much more than just a few lines of a poem. You pack a lot of emotion into only 8 lines, which is very nice! Good job!
Alon_Freevoice said...
Jul. 22, 2011 at 10:52 pm
Maybe, movements is better than dances in the 4th line. But it's just me, so...

This poem is good - short and easy to read... Keep it up :)
CarrieAnn13 said...
Jul. 22, 2011 at 10:45 pm
Short and sweet!  It's a nice poem, saying how kids aren't supposed to have fun.
Anagam said...
Jul. 19, 2011 at 7:43 pm
i like it! it's true. so much poer in a few lines. I could hear crickets chirping in the silence part. you know how this made me feel? I don't behave. haha. Good job!
Egyptiangirl13 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
May 11, 2010 at 8:18 pm
I agree, so much meaning in so little lines!!! Its like God telling us to behave and stop being so selfish!!!
reillysmiley22 said...
May 11, 2010 at 4:07 pm
as short as it is, this poem is so powerful, i really like it
DaylightDarkness replied...
May 11, 2010 at 5:23 pm
Thank you very much.
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