She smelled a hint of his

April 16, 2010
By WillieG BRONZE, Florida City, Florida
WillieG BRONZE, Florida City, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
Knowledge is limited; but imagination encircles the world.

She smelled a hint of his
cologne, delighted that
he asked to escort her
to the door after their date.

They were both very shy,
and it was young love.
The kind that made a weak
heart flinch. Innocent as it
was, it was real. It was very,

very real. After quick goodbyes,
there was a painfully long
pause. But what he did next
came surprisingly natural.

He leaned towards her
pale, beautiful face.
And when they kissed,
her tender lips soft
against his, they gave
into their feelings and
embraced each other.

Their bodies pressed
tight and they spoke
sweet words for the
rest of the night.

I love you
I love you, too.

The author's comments:
I have a crush on this sweet, shy, gorgeous girl at my school. She and I are the two main characters. I picked the photo I picked because I play guitar and it would be my dream date with her.

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This article has 1 comment.

Diana123 said...
on Jun. 1 2010 at 6:40 pm

Man this poem is AMAZING.

Kepp up the good work!


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