The words I meant to say

April 13, 2010
By anaisp15 GOLD, Batavia, Illinois
anaisp15 GOLD, Batavia, Illinois
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Favorite Quote:
And in the music we find ourself


The picture writes
my words draw
of words I've never said
of words
words of



love



fear
of things I've been ashamed

But now at last I've lost my fear
now at last the words are here
But now alas my words are late
now alas the words are old

The sun,my sun is setting
setting
setting

setting away

away
away to the waters of death

And now I shall die still







still

spluttering


the



words
I meant to say



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on May. 16 2010 at 3:47 pm
Egyptiangirl13 GOLD, Kansas City, Missouri
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Favorite Quote:
\"either write something worth reading or do something worth writing. -Benjamin Franklin

\"If columbus would have turned back, no one would have blamed him. No one would have remembered him either.\"

\"If music be the food of love, play on.\"

wow i love this its beautiful-i have one being posted that is similar to this-u should check it out in two or three weeks-whenever it come out-its called Words unspoken (thanks-keep writing!!!!

 


on May. 14 2010 at 10:45 pm
HeatherBee BRONZE, I Live In, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
Go on and try to tear me down. I will be rising from the ground, like a skyscraper

Love is louder than the pressure to be perfect

aww that was greatttt i loved it:]

anaisp15 GOLD said...
on May. 14 2010 at 8:12 pm
anaisp15 GOLD, Batavia, Illinois
15 articles 0 photos 39 comments

Favorite Quote:
And in the music we find ourself

still-a-novice aka TCA make a profile!!!!!!!!!!!!

on May. 14 2010 at 5:28 pm
iknowyourheart BRONZE, Casper, Wyoming
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Favorite Quote:
"And I'll borrow words from all my favorite paragraphs to write a ballad while we say the things we hope would mean the most to me and each letter sent I've found in the pages of hope for the days when I feel like I've lost everything."-mayday parade

Deliscious

anaisp15 GOLD said...
on May. 13 2010 at 9:12 pm
anaisp15 GOLD, Batavia, Illinois
15 articles 0 photos 39 comments

Favorite Quote:
And in the music we find ourself

Do I know u? How did i tell you it was good? Thank you 4 the compliment

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 


on May. 13 2010 at 7:30 pm
Awesome! You told me this was good, but this is great! WOW!

anaisp15 GOLD said...
on May. 11 2010 at 8:58 pm
anaisp15 GOLD, Batavia, Illinois
15 articles 0 photos 39 comments

Favorite Quote:
And in the music we find ourself

Thanks, I think that the way the poem is presented is very important to the poems meaning.

on May. 7 2010 at 9:15 am
Jade-McKaye SILVER, West Jordan, Utah
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Favorite Quote:
what happened to a dream?

this is really doog, the way it is presented is very creative, i love it.


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