Not Another Poem

April 13, 2010
By hazelquill8723 SILVER, Makati City, Other
hazelquill8723 SILVER, Makati City, Other
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This isn't a poem about a boy
(and i was never in love with him either)
I'm not going to tell you about how he stole my heart
(because i handed it to him on a platter)
This isnt a story of "the girl who loved a boy, and he didnt know she existed"
(in fact, he was Quite aware)
And i'm certainly not going to explain how his eyes weren't beautiful
(no, i think i'll save that for someone worth while)
Because this is Not a poem about a boy
(this is a poem about you).


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Shelbs13 GOLD said...
on Jun. 30 2010 at 12:17 am
Shelbs13 GOLD, White Plains, New York
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Favorite Quote:
I have too many to even name so I'm not even going to go there... lol

No, but I'll check it out. Thanks :)

Can you read my story too? I posted more, but it has to be approved lol. I would like your opinion as well. Thank you


on Jun. 27 2010 at 10:49 pm
hazelquill8723 SILVER, Makati City, Other
6 articles 2 photos 3 comments

thanks! i really wasn't sure about it, but i'm glad someone else can relate to it too

have you seen any of the other things i've written? i'd love to get your opinion


Shelbs13 GOLD said...
on Jun. 16 2010 at 3:22 pm
Shelbs13 GOLD, White Plains, New York
10 articles 0 photos 17 comments

Favorite Quote:
I have too many to even name so I'm not even going to go there... lol

i really like this...

it relates to me and it's just special

keep writting :)



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