April 12, 2010
By NightOwls GOLD, Medford, Oregon
NightOwls GOLD, Medford, Oregon
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Favorite Quote:
The hardest workers are the most successful.

Gone, everything is gone.
All that I worked for, erased.
Everyone never saw me.

People look right through me.
I wonder if anyone would notice if I was gone.
If anyone would go to my funeral.
If anyone would send me flowers.
I wonder if I would go to Heaven for being invisible.
Or HELL for not being someone.

I would probably be called a name wherever I go.
Everyone has a soul name.
Mine is Alone

The author's comments:
I got the idea from my english teacher when he assigned us this assignment.

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on Aug. 28 2010 at 3:18 pm
thewriteidea DIAMOND, Pleasanton, California
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Favorite Quote:
"Don't cry that it's over, smile because it has happened."

WOW. this poem is soooo deep! you are a really good writer. i love the lines about the heaven for being invisible or hell for not being someone. they really spoke to me. i also love the whole name thing at the end, it was a perfect ending to a perfectly written poem.

rate/comment on some of my work, if you'd like. this is really great! keep writing!!(:


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