His last time here

April 12, 2010
By rain-rain111 PLATINUM, Roselle, Illinois
rain-rain111 PLATINUM, Roselle, Illinois
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Favorite Quote:
He offered her the world but she said she had her own.

Breaths that aren't deep enough
Remind me of your last vision here.
The blood stain on your carpet
and all the screams you couldn't hear.
It hurt me deep
to hear you go
So why did you leave?
Without me to know?
You should have known you were loved
by so many one can't count.
I hope your watching this from above
Even though there was more for you to mount!

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_Mags_ SILVER said...
on Jul. 4 2010 at 10:12 pm
_Mags_ SILVER, Somewhere, North Carolina
9 articles 7 photos 436 comments

Favorite Quote:
- I stare danger in the face and giggle
- Never argue with an idiot, people might not know the difference
-R.A.P (Retards Attempting Poetry)
-Tip Cologne ryhmes with alone

wow is all i can say, you have a lot of talent 6/5. Keep writing, and i hope tocheck out more of your writing. Can you checkout some of mine?


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