His last time here

April 12, 2010
Breaths that aren't deep enough
Remind me of your last vision here.
The blood stain on your carpet
and all the screams you couldn't hear.
It hurt me deep
to hear you go
So why did you leave?
Without me to know?
You should have known you were loved
by so many one can't count.
I hope your watching this from above
Even though there was more for you to mount!

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_Elsy_ said...
Jul. 4, 2010 at 10:12 pm
wow is all i can say, you have a lot of talent 6/5. Keep writing, and i hope tocheck out more of your writing. Can you checkout some of mine?
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