im sorry

April 12, 2010
By RoseR. PLATINUM, Tomah, Wisconsin
RoseR. PLATINUM, Tomah, Wisconsin
25 articles 0 photos 23 comments

Favorite Quote:
id rather be hated for who i am than be loved for someone im not, ill never be JUST a memory.


I’m sorry mom I should’ve tried.
You know I hate to see you cry
I should’ve stayed away from drugs
I should’ve given you more hugs
I wish I could’ve shown my love
A disappointing gift
That’s all I am, a pile of it.
But the days go on and on
And every time I try I fall
I’m sorry mom I love you lots
Until I lay in the box
When I die
And when I’m gone
I’m sorry but you’re still my mom



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on Sep. 9 2010 at 11:52 am
SashaaFiercex3 PLATINUM, Flushing, New York
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Favorite Quote:
"Don't look back unless you're planning on going in that direction"

I Love this poem

good job

check out more of my poems

thanks


on Aug. 2 2010 at 2:31 pm
RoseR. PLATINUM, Tomah, Wisconsin
25 articles 0 photos 23 comments

Favorite Quote:
id rather be hated for who i am than be loved for someone im not, ill never be JUST a memory.

i have noticed that you have commented on multiple poems of mine and id like you to know how much i appreciate your enthusiasm for my work. best wishes. check up again sometime new poems come out from time to time.

 


on Jun. 5 2010 at 8:51 pm
Miss.ReNa SILVER, Sacramento, California
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I THINK YOU DID A GOOD JOB ON THIS POEM...VERY NICE!!!!!

on May. 6 2010 at 2:45 pm
RoseR. PLATINUM, Tomah, Wisconsin
25 articles 0 photos 23 comments

Favorite Quote:
id rather be hated for who i am than be loved for someone im not, ill never be JUST a memory.

btw- this site edited my poem, they remover two words. a dissapointing gift is $hit- original text.


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