I Can't Wait

April 8, 2010
By BiancaMarie SILVER, Colchester, Vermont
BiancaMarie SILVER, Colchester, Vermont
5 articles 0 photos 45 comments

Favorite Quote:
better loved then lost then never to have loved at all


Here we are
Thinking about nothing but each other
waiting for the day
that our eyes meet and lips touch

that day we will charish with our lives
i will never be able to forget it
i hope time goes by faster
so we can be togetherr forever

I want you here with me
to hold me and help me though things
to call me yours and yours only
and to forget everything besides me and you

Cant wait till that day
i will pray and pray
for time to go by
and just pause when were with each other

i cant wait for the day that i say "i do"
and you say it too
make it for real
and forever

i cant wait for the day
we have our first kid
something the two of us made
with loads of love and passion

I hope we will be together forever
so we can live life like this
nothing but happyness
and our lives full of bliss


The author's comments:
Me and my boyfriend have been together for a while. Were pretty far apart but we wannna be with each other forever. I just hope this poem makes you guys think of that special person you wanna be with forever. Or helps you search all over for him/her. Doesnt matter where they are if you guys love each other you can make it work. I hope you liked it. (:

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jlw11 SILVER said...
on Oct. 8 2010 at 9:37 am
jlw11 SILVER, Fayette, Alabama
5 articles 2 photos 26 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The only things in life you regret, are the risks that you never take."

That was supposed to be 'your writing is great'! Sorry! I'm a grammar freak!!! (: lol

jlw11 SILVER said...
on Oct. 8 2010 at 9:36 am
jlw11 SILVER, Fayette, Alabama
5 articles 2 photos 26 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The only things in life you regret, are the risks that you never take."

Great job! I wouldn't know how it feels to have a boyfriend so far away! So, kudos for you and your bf! You're writing is great. If you can, check out some of my work! (: Once again, great job! (:

krysten SILVER said...
on Jun. 5 2010 at 9:04 pm
krysten SILVER, Weiser, Idaho
9 articles 0 photos 47 comments

Favorite Quote:
Smile now or smile later, but remember the pain you hide, will only grow greater.
*krysten*

thanks so much!

on Jun. 5 2010 at 3:20 pm
BiancaMarie SILVER, Colchester, Vermont
5 articles 0 photos 45 comments

Favorite Quote:
better loved then lost then never to have loved at all

thanks gurly. i'll be sure to chekc yours out as soon as i cann. <3

krysten SILVER said...
on Jun. 4 2010 at 12:36 am
krysten SILVER, Weiser, Idaho
9 articles 0 photos 47 comments

Favorite Quote:
Smile now or smile later, but remember the pain you hide, will only grow greater.
*krysten*

I totally know what its like to have a boyfriend far away. Me and my boyfriend are fighting hard to stay together because we love eachother so much. Your poem really reached out to me because I feel the same way, all of my poems are about me and him breaking up and getting back together. Its a struggle so stay strong and everything will fall into place :) you should read my poems :) great job! keep writting!

on May. 26 2010 at 10:27 am
BiancaMarie SILVER, Colchester, Vermont
5 articles 0 photos 45 comments

Favorite Quote:
better loved then lost then never to have loved at all

thanks :D i lot of heart went into it

Key14 GOLD said...
on May. 24 2010 at 8:37 am
Key14 GOLD, Douglasville, Georgia
11 articles 0 photos 14 comments

Favorite Quote:
If Love is a Lie then is Hate the Truth



-Crosskey

I love it it's amazing

DevonP SILVER said...
on May. 21 2010 at 5:42 pm
DevonP SILVER, Wolcott, New York
7 articles 0 photos 8 comments

Favorite Quote:
" There's nothing wrong with me, this is how i'm suppose to be in a land of make believe that don't believe in me" - Greenday

i agree with spades.

on May. 19 2010 at 10:36 am
BiancaMarie SILVER, Colchester, Vermont
5 articles 0 photos 45 comments

Favorite Quote:
better loved then lost then never to have loved at all

yeah i have noticed that too.....butt  i coudnt help it....i usually don't fall in love with a guy so fastt....but there was something about codyy that just made me fall in love with him.....itss really hard to get over him but i am trying very hard! thankss for commenting on my stuff! (=

on May. 18 2010 at 4:35 pm
Egyptiangirl13 GOLD, Kansas City, Missouri
14 articles 0 photos 501 comments

Favorite Quote:
\"either write something worth reading or do something worth writing. -Benjamin Franklin

\"If columbus would have turned back, no one would have blamed him. No one would have remembered him either.\"

\"If music be the food of love, play on.\"

ur very welcome

DejaVu SILVER said...
on May. 18 2010 at 1:35 pm
DejaVu SILVER, Albuquerque, New Mexico
6 articles 0 photos 4 comments

Favorite Quote:
All is fair in love and war

So you commented on my work (Heartless) and asked me to rate and comment on yours. SO here i am :]. I tihnk this poem has good concept. ONe thing it really made me think about though was the fact that sometimes you might rush the thought of love and get to *caught up*. Really just be careful with these feelings.

on May. 18 2010 at 9:58 am
BiancaMarie SILVER, Colchester, Vermont
5 articles 0 photos 45 comments

Favorite Quote:
better loved then lost then never to have loved at all

thankss (=

on May. 17 2010 at 8:07 pm
Egyptiangirl13 GOLD, Kansas City, Missouri
14 articles 0 photos 501 comments

Favorite Quote:
\"either write something worth reading or do something worth writing. -Benjamin Franklin

\"If columbus would have turned back, no one would have blamed him. No one would have remembered him either.\"

\"If music be the food of love, play on.\"

this is great-i love it very much!!!

on May. 13 2010 at 6:16 pm
BiancaMarie SILVER, Colchester, Vermont
5 articles 0 photos 45 comments

Favorite Quote:
better loved then lost then never to have loved at all

yeahh thankss hunn! 

 


on May. 13 2010 at 6:15 pm
BiancaMarie SILVER, Colchester, Vermont
5 articles 0 photos 45 comments

Favorite Quote:
better loved then lost then never to have loved at all

hehee thankss gladd you liked it....its hard for me to read over again bc cody is now my ex and i miss him soooo veryy muchh ):



on May. 13 2010 at 5:36 pm
LoveNmhyLiife BRONZE, Roanoke, Virginia
3 articles 0 photos 4 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Its easy to fall inlove but it's very hard to fall out of it"

ii thiink yu should keep wriiting but dnt wriite 4 nobody but yourself bc iif you are nt happy wiith your work then y wriite

k.james SILVER said...
on May. 11 2010 at 2:50 pm
k.james SILVER, Whitby, Other
5 articles 0 photos 110 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Love without action is meaningless, action without love is irrelevant." -Deepak Chopra

Simply beautiful, this peice moved me. It's just what i needed a pick me up :) Thank you so much for writing this and I hope many other find it and that it impacts them just as much as it has impacted me <3

Oh, and could you read some of my stuff I only have two posted right now but there are more waiting to be approved and I would love your opinion/input :)



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