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Here we are
Thinking about nothing but each other
waiting for the day
that our eyes meet and lips touch

that day we will charish with our lives
i will never be able to forget it
i hope time goes by faster
so we can be togetherr forever

I want you here with me
to hold me and help me though things
to call me yours and yours only
and to forget everything besides me and you

Cant wait till that day
i will pray and pray
for time to go by
and just pause when were with each other

i cant wait for the day that i say "i do"
and you say it too
make it for real
and forever

i cant wait for the day
we have our first kid
something the two of us made
with loads of love and passion

I hope we will be together forever
so we can live life like this
nothing but happyness
and our lives full of bliss



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jlw11 said...
Oct. 8, 2010 at 9:36 am:
Great job! I wouldn't know how it feels to have a boyfriend so far away! So, kudos for you and your bf! You're writing is great. If you can, check out some of my work! (: Once again, great job! (:
 
jlw11 replied...
Oct. 8, 2010 at 9:37 am :
That was supposed to be 'your writing is great'! Sorry! I'm a grammar freak!!! (: lol
 
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KrYsTeN said...
Jun. 4, 2010 at 12:36 am:
I totally know what its like to have a boyfriend far away. Me and my boyfriend are fighting hard to stay together because we love eachother so much. Your poem really reached out to me because I feel the same way, all of my poems are about me and him breaking up and getting back together. Its a struggle so stay strong and everything will fall into place :) you should read my poems :) great job! keep writting!
 
BiancaMarie replied...
Jun. 5, 2010 at 3:20 pm :
thanks gurly. i'll be sure to chekc yours out as soon as i cann. <3
 
SnuggleBunny replied...
Jun. 5, 2010 at 9:04 pm :
thanks so much!
 
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CrossKey said...
May 24, 2010 at 8:37 am:
I love it it's amazing
 
BiancaMarie replied...
May 26, 2010 at 10:27 am :
thanks :D i lot of heart went into it
 
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Egyptiangirl13 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
May 18, 2010 at 4:35 pm:
ur very welcome
 
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♠♠♠♠♠ said...
May 18, 2010 at 1:35 pm:
So you commented on my work (Heartless) and asked me to rate and comment on yours. SO here i am :]. I tihnk this poem has good concept. ONe thing it really made me think about though was the fact that sometimes you might rush the thought of love and get to *caught up*. Really just be careful with these feelings.
 
BiancaMarie replied...
May 19, 2010 at 10:36 am :
yeah i have noticed that too.....butt  i coudnt help it....i usually don't fall in love with a guy so fastt....but there was something about codyy that just made me fall in love with him.....itss really hard to get over him but i am trying very hard! thankss for commenting on my stuff! (=
 
DevonP replied...
May 21, 2010 at 5:42 pm :
i agree with spades.
 
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Egyptiangirl13 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
May 17, 2010 at 8:07 pm:
this is great-i love it very much!!!
 
BiancaMarie replied...
May 18, 2010 at 9:58 am :
thankss (=
 
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LoveNmhyLiife said...
May 13, 2010 at 5:36 pm:
ii thiink yu should keep wriiting but dnt wriite 4 nobody but yourself bc iif you are nt happy wiith your work then y wriite
 
BiancaMarie replied...
May 13, 2010 at 6:16 pm :

yeahh thankss hunn! 

 

 
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Kairah027 said...
May 11, 2010 at 2:50 pm:

Simply beautiful, this peice moved me. It's just what i needed a pick me up :) Thank you so much for writing this and I hope many other find it and that it impacts them just as much as it has impacted me <3

Oh, and could you read some of my stuff I only have two posted right now but there are more waiting to be approved and I would love your opinion/input :)

 
BiancaMarie replied...
May 13, 2010 at 6:15 pm :

hehee thankss gladd you liked it....its hard for me to read over again bc cody is now my ex and i miss him soooo veryy muchh ):


 
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