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Ghostly

How i managed to fly?
I'm not sure
Its not like i was born with wings or anything
Sure i was sore all the time
but not able to soar at all
I was never free like a bird
Only free spirited
Noone ever told me to go to my room
I didn't have one
I was never alone, i just was lonely
Instead of glancing my way
and never having anything to say

People see right through me



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xBaByGiRrL22x said...
Sept. 13, 2010 at 8:36 pm
wow i luv thiss. awesome job(:
 
Boosflash This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
May 10, 2010 at 8:17 pm
I like this. I like it because(to me) the title is not reffered to until the last of the poem-thats what I try to do... I like how you started it off with a question. and I love the play on words. I love it all. this is gonna be one of my favorites.  5 stars.
 
jessica.cherish.conner replied...
May 10, 2010 at 8:20 pm

Yay!thanks soooo soo much!

i love that you love it,and i love that you noticed all those things and it means alot coming from a great author like yourself!!thanks(:

 
Boosflash This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
May 10, 2010 at 8:31 pm
thank you:) Imma read more of your stuff, do your dance.
 
jessica.cherish.conner replied...
May 10, 2010 at 8:57 pm
Hahaha nicccee., very original!
 
Egyptiangirl13 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
May 10, 2010 at 7:44 pm
I'm so glad! just promise u'll read and comment on mine when they are posted in three weeks-ur opinion means alot!!!
 
jessica.cherish.conner replied...
May 10, 2010 at 7:50 pm
WOW thanks!! yes no problem I'm looking foward to it!!(:
 
Egyptiangirl13 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
May 10, 2010 at 7:53 pm
thank you-you rock!!!!
 
Egyptiangirl13 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
May 10, 2010 at 7:38 pm
dang! you are just so good. Goodness gracious!!!
 
jessica.cherish.conner replied...
May 10, 2010 at 7:41 pm
You don't know how good it feels to have a fan!! thankkss sooo much!(:
 
timevampire This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
May 10, 2010 at 12:30 pm
I like the tone of this one. It's like you're just talking you me.
 
jessica.cherish.conner replied...
May 10, 2010 at 7:25 pm

Awh great(:

thanks(:

ps. love your writings!

 
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