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Everlasting

April 11, 2010
By Ashly SILVER, Louisville, Kentucky
Ashly SILVER, Louisville, Kentucky
9 articles 1 photo 16 comments

His glare,
It burns

His touch,
As cold as ice…

His heart,
Made of stone

He’s a brick
Or so he appears…

His mind,
Filled with shadows

His eyes,
A lunar eclipse,

His pain,
Everlasting…



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on Jul. 29 2011 at 1:04 pm
blitsnik SILVER, Palm Bay, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
"If you must mount the gallows, give a coin to the headman, a jest to the crowd, and meet the drop with a smile on your lips."

Its good, and a good flow but short. it seems as if its cutting off abrubtly and that there should be more.