The Wall

April 11, 2010
By Syarra_Greenwood BRONZE, Andover, Ohio
Syarra_Greenwood BRONZE, Andover, Ohio
2 articles 0 photos 23 comments

Favorite Quote:
Smile, happy looks good on you!!! ( :


I saw who you were inside
then you changed
you built a wall around your heart
one I can't break through
I tried time and rime again
to reach out to you
but you just pushed me away
so I've built a wall to keep you

out
and now no one can get in!!


The author's comments:
One of my best friends drew a picture titled the wall and it gave me the idea for this poem. It has become one of my favorites and I hope that every one likes it!

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on Jul. 27 2010 at 8:36 pm
xiao_girl BRONZE, Sheboygan, Wisconsin
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I liked it...It's short but very powerful...srry..i didn't get to you sooner...been very busy lately..plus I haven't written anything lately...well..yeah...very good...keep it up and Yes!!! you should make it longer with details..other than that I enjoyed it...

_Mags_ SILVER said...
on Jul. 6 2010 at 9:22 pm
_Mags_ SILVER, Somewhere, North Carolina
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Favorite Quote:
- I stare danger in the face and giggle
- Never argue with an idiot, people might not know the difference
-R.A.P (Retards Attempting Poetry)
-Tip Cologne ryhmes with alone

beautiful, short but deep 5/5 :D  keep writing, and i hope to check out more of your stuff? And i like the title haha

Btw-can you check out some of my stuff?


Katrselyn said...
on May. 15 2010 at 11:39 am
Katrselyn, Kankakee, Illinois
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i understand it... but maybe you should make longer poems with details. It may go far keep tryin!


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