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The Wall

I saw who you were inside
then you changed
you built a wall around your heart
one I can't break through
I tried time and rime again
to reach out to you
but you just pushed me away
so I've built a wall to keep you

out
and now no one can get in!!



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xiao_vang said...
Jul. 27, 2010 at 8:36 pm:
I liked it...It's short but very powerful...srry..i didn't get to you sooner...been very busy lately..plus I haven't written anything lately...well..yeah...very good...keep it up and Yes!!! you should make it longer with details..other than that I enjoyed it...
 
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_Elsy_ said...
Jul. 6, 2010 at 9:22 pm:

beautiful, short but deep 5/5 :D  keep writing, and i hope to check out more of your stuff? And i like the title haha

Btw-can you check out some of my stuff?

 
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BlueEyesCry said...
May 15, 2010 at 11:39 am:
i understand it... but maybe you should make longer poems with details. It may go far keep tryin!
 
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