Thinking of You

April 10, 2010
By RedvinesWTHCantTheyDo GOLD, Zephyrhills, Florida
RedvinesWTHCantTheyDo GOLD, Zephyrhills, Florida
10 articles 0 photos 154 comments

Favorite Quote:
"You make one more comment like that I will wrap you in a tortilla shell and eat you as a snack, maybe with some nice pico de gillo."~ Lauren Lopez in Starship
"If you don't die for something, I'll kill you for nothing."~ Lauren Lopez in Starship


Paramore buzzing in my ears
Just laying there in bed
All my thoughts and fears
Filling my mind with dread.

"Maybe if my heart stops beating,
It won't hurt this much."
Maybe then I'll stop needing
And wanting you so much.

I don't want to let you go
But with you so far away
Maybe you shouldn't know
Just exactly what I want to say.

As I'm lying in my bed
Quietly awaiting sleep
Music filling up my head
I realize I shouldn't have fallen so deep.


The author's comments:
Will you ever know?

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on Aug. 9 2010 at 4:35 pm
RedvinesWTHCantTheyDo GOLD, Zephyrhills, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
"You make one more comment like that I will wrap you in a tortilla shell and eat you as a snack, maybe with some nice pico de gillo."~ Lauren Lopez in Starship
"If you don't die for something, I'll kill you for nothing."~ Lauren Lopez in Starship

Lol, thanks. Sure, I'll check it out.

on Aug. 7 2010 at 1:01 pm
Alcanno DIAMOND, Mexia, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
"If you love life, don't waste time, for time is what life is
made up of."

-- Bruce Lee

Love this - I couldn't relate anymore unless I was actually you! Could you check out my poem Valentines Day? I'd really appreciate it! Thanks and keep writing!

on Jul. 21 2010 at 4:40 pm
Sissybug2012 PLATINUM, Union, Missouri
36 articles 0 photos 128 comments

Favorite Quote:
"the greatest thing you'll ever learn, is just to love and be loved in return." -MOULIN ROUGE (song lyrics)

awwwww i liked this one a lot.....very good work.......

PenInHand GOLD said...
on Jul. 21 2010 at 10:54 am
PenInHand GOLD, Fayetteville, North Carolina
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Favorite Quote:
" Kemps!"

I really like this! It flows very well. =]

on Jul. 17 2010 at 6:35 pm
RedvinesWTHCantTheyDo GOLD, Zephyrhills, Florida
10 articles 0 photos 154 comments

Favorite Quote:
"You make one more comment like that I will wrap you in a tortilla shell and eat you as a snack, maybe with some nice pico de gillo."~ Lauren Lopez in Starship
"If you don't die for something, I'll kill you for nothing."~ Lauren Lopez in Starship

I really appreciate all of your comments thank you.

on Jul. 15 2010 at 4:19 pm
Just.A.Dream SILVER, Lake Geneva, Wisconsin
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Favorite Quote:
Part of the J7X team. :)

Very deep and meaningful. I see a lot of poems with a rhyme scheme like this and it sounds really weird, but the rhyme scheme worked for this one. :)

on Jul. 13 2010 at 10:09 pm
ReadWriteBreathe PLATINUM, Pocatello, Idaho
24 articles 4 photos 114 comments

Favorite Quote:
"You have to consider the possibility that God does not like you" Tyler Durden Fight Club

This is a great poem. I love it. It's sad but beautiful.

on Jun. 25 2010 at 6:26 pm
SarClark BRONZE, NC, Connecticut
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I love this, Jess. Especially the Paramore part, because I do that too :)

Really really nice job.


on Jun. 21 2010 at 1:15 pm
Serendipity_Pen GOLD, Shakopee, Minnesota
12 articles 28 photos 86 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The only way of finding the limits of the possible is by going beyond them into the impossible."
~ Arthur C. Clarke
"Better to remain silent and thought a fool then to speak and remove all doubt." ~Abraham Lincoln

Wow. Thats a really good poem. I wish I could write like that.

on Jun. 16 2010 at 12:37 pm
real_as_can_be101 PLATINUM, Mustang, Oklahoma
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Favorite Quote:
You can love and hate, but which is more irrate? -unknown

Amazing!!!!! love it!

on Jun. 16 2010 at 12:27 pm
Supernova7 GOLD, Redford, Texas
16 articles 6 photos 394 comments

Favorite Quote:
Let me cry my tears let me live in sorrow as long as you promise to be with me tomorrow
By Me:)

You are a very good writer. Your poems are deep and I like your style:)

Swiwi17 SILVER said...
on Jun. 16 2010 at 12:20 pm
Swiwi17 SILVER, Glasscity, Nevada
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Favorite Quote:
"Nothing ever promised tomorrow today"

This is well written. It tells a story, and it tells is simply. Im my opinion that's the best way. It's the other end of the scale without using too much detail and description, but still being quality poetry at the same time. (: I like it a lott

on May. 29 2010 at 6:59 am
once_a_redhead SILVER, Lady Lake, Florida
9 articles 0 photos 114 comments

Favorite Quote:
"love is somethin' we all feel even if we don't know that we do!!"

this is put together nicely and is deep! obviously its personal im sorry for every and naything you have went throuhg just know i have felt your pain

on May. 9 2010 at 7:34 pm
JustAlice. SILVER, Wesley Chapel, Florida
5 articles 0 photos 62 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The greatest thing you'll ever learn is just to love and be loved in return." Moulin Rouge

i remember reading this. i like it. i dont remember if i had told you that. 

on May. 8 2010 at 2:24 pm
HeatherBee BRONZE, I Live In, Texas
1 article 0 photos 1985 comments

Favorite Quote:
Go on and try to tear me down. I will be rising from the ground, like a skyscraper

Love is louder than the pressure to be perfect

whoa this is a great poem. it flows very nicely, its awesomeee

-Kal- GOLD said...
on May. 7 2010 at 5:49 pm
-Kal- GOLD, Carthage, North Carolina
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Favorite Quote:
"Faith sees the invisible, believes the incredible, and recieves the impossible"
-Anonymous

This was really good Jess. I'm sorry you are hurting so much, I wish things were better for you... I love you


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