April 10, 2010
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Leave her where she lay.
Broken, with a tear stained face.
Hit her,
Show her she was a mistake.
Prove it to her.
Prove that she is unwanted.
Prove to her that she is worthless.

Tell her you love her.
Earn your daughters trust.
Then lose it.
Slap her face,
Twist her wrist.
Leave her with bruises.

Scream in her ear.
She's worthless anyway,

Let her wear that mask.
Let her hide the pain.
You didn't do anything wrong to her.
She's just overreacting.
It's okay.
You just showed her tough love.
No harm done.

You have no clue
What you did to that poor child.
Who knows what she will grow up to be.
You'll learn though.
You'll find out.
She'll get back at you,
For all of the abuse.
You'll find out that it's you,
Who is worthless.

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3A07_rotate180degrees said...
Jul. 14, 2011 at 4:19 pm
Wow, this is really good! I can feel the emotion behind it... I read how you said it was kind of personal. I have no idea what you may have been/are going through, but it's good that you can channel some of your emotions through your writing. Keep it up!
Fredwardness said...
May 22, 2010 at 12:14 pm
This is...just wow. You did an excellent job
Amandurrcakes replied...
May 22, 2010 at 12:54 pm
Thanks.... it's kind of.. personal... *sigh*
Fredwardness replied...
May 22, 2010 at 12:55 pm
I...can understand that...if you want to talk about it...I will listen. I...can kinda relate...to your poem. But, I understand I'm a stranger. Sorry. I...hope things are better for you.
Amandurrcakes replied...
May 22, 2010 at 12:58 pm

Eh, things could be worse. They could also be better.

Oh well... I always tryo to look on the bright side of things. [5 stars for being optimistic!]


Fredwardness replied...
May 22, 2010 at 1:01 pm
Well...it is imprtant to see the bright side of things...but...also...to be realistic at the same time. Life...is very confusing.
Amandurrcakes replied...
May 22, 2010 at 1:02 pm
I know it is.
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