Goodbye, my almost lover

April 9, 2010
By Emiline SILVER, Nashville, Tennessee
Emiline SILVER, Nashville, Tennessee
9 articles 0 photos 33 comments

Favorite Quote:
"When deep injury is done to us, we will never recover until we forgive. Forgiveness cannot change the past. But it does enlarge the future."- Mary Karen Read


And when you left you broke my heart
a thousand pieces, impossible to restart.
Your fingertips across my skin,
your familiar smell, breathin' it in.
I never you want to see you unhappy.
And I thought you'd always be there for me.
Your voice, the sweetest sound,
the only thing for miles around.
You & Me.
Your lips, their gentle touch,
the breeze is playin' in the rush.
With You & Me.
Your self, the sweetest thing,
just like when you bought that ring
Images.....
Floatin' through my mind.
Goodbye, my almost lover.
Goodbye my oldest friend.
Should'a known you'd bring me heartache
you always do, in the end.


The author's comments:
This was inspired by the song "Almost Lover"

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on May. 14 2010 at 9:17 am
PrincessBethyyy GOLD, Knoxville, Tennessee
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Favorite Quote:
"Being happy doesn't mean everythings perfect, it means looking past the imperfections in life." -Gerard Way.

Far too simalar to the song. It's good to get your insporation from the songs, but change it completely. It's really not good to use the song's lines. This is basically plagerism.

Emiline SILVER said...
on May. 12 2010 at 4:35 pm
Emiline SILVER, Nashville, Tennessee
9 articles 0 photos 33 comments

Favorite Quote:
"When deep injury is done to us, we will never recover until we forgive. Forgiveness cannot change the past. But it does enlarge the future."- Mary Karen Read

Awesome, thanks! And totally, sure thing!

on May. 12 2010 at 1:42 am
AlexandraVasari PLATINUM, Fort Stewart, Georgia
28 articles 4 photos 174 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Writing songs is super intimate. It's a bit like getting naked"~ Gwen Stefani

I've never heard the song before, but this is good!:) Could you check some of my stuff out too?!I would really appreciate it!:)

on May. 6 2010 at 8:59 am
KaliKilledKarma BRONZE, Bradyville, Tennessee
3 articles 0 photos 6 comments
This is nice, but far too similar to the song... try to submit your original work?


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