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Goodbye, my almost lover

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And when you left you broke my heart
a thousand pieces, impossible to restart.
Your fingertips across my skin,
your familiar smell, breathin' it in.
I never you want to see you unhappy.
And I thought you'd always be there for me.
Your voice, the sweetest sound,
the only thing for miles around.
You & Me.
Your lips, their gentle touch,
the breeze is playin' in the rush.
With You & Me.
Your self, the sweetest thing,
just like when you bought that ring
Images.....
Floatin' through my mind.
Goodbye, my almost lover.
Goodbye my oldest friend.
Should'a known you'd bring me heartache
you always do, in the end.



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bethmoftw. said...
May 14, 2010 at 9:17 am
Far too simalar to the song. It's good to get your insporation from the songs, but change it completely. It's really not good to use the song's lines. This is basically plagerism.
 
KaliKilledKarma said...
May 6, 2010 at 8:59 am
This is nice, but far too similar to the song... try to submit your original work?
 
HeronHero replied...
May 12, 2010 at 1:42 am
I've never heard the song before, but this is good!:) Could you check some of my stuff out too?!I would really appreciate it!:)
 
Muffy replied...
May 12, 2010 at 4:35 pm
Awesome, thanks! And totally, sure thing!
 
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