I spread my wings

April 8, 2010
amicrazyorisitjusteveryoneelse PLATINUM, Kula, Hawaii
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Favorite Quote:
"Everything you dream is real and everything real is a dream"


I spread my wings

Arms?

Waiting to jump as birds cheerfully sing

I am bewitched by their charm

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Many meters below me

Lies the crashing waves

Still in a trance from the birds melody

I am snapped back to reality and away from my impending grave


The smell of salt
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Is always fresh in the air

Coming from the light, clear, cobalt

Always present, beneath the moons shine and the suns glare


It awaits me

Ever so calmly it waits
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It will wait forever into eternity

I don’t have that long but my lover still awaits


I spread my wings

(My arms)

Waiting to jump as birds cheerfully sing
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I am again bewitched by their charm



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on May. 7 2010 at 10:46 pm
amicrazyorisitjusteveryoneelse PLATINUM, Kula, Hawaii
48 articles 0 photos 198 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Everything you dream is real and everything real is a dream"

thanks guys!!! some jerk rates all my stuff really low everytime it comes out :P

on May. 6 2010 at 11:45 pm
Frog-Prince PLATINUM, Lakeside, California
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Favorite Quote:
"Peace is not the absence of conflict, but the ability to cope with it"

awesome! lol I love the word "bewitched" it just has a kiinda enchanting sound to it great job! =)

on May. 6 2010 at 5:30 am
hxcRocker DIAMOND, Haiku, Hawaii
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Lots of good internal rhyming and a good poem.


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