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April 5, 2010
By freeyourmind PLATINUM, Princeton, Illinois
freeyourmind PLATINUM, Princeton, Illinois
22 articles 1 photo 20 comments

Favorite Quote:
You can never truly appreciate what's good in life until you have experienced what's bad.


Who am I to them?
As we reenact our daily routines
Seeing the same people constantly
At the same time
Every time
Slaves to the clock
Tick tock
It’s in our thoughts
That we are part of society
But what of us as a single person?
Who are we?
We know everyone else
Yet we don’t know ourselves
How do we look to the world
What is our impression?
Is that why I ask the question
What do they think of me?
Because I don’t know what to think of myself?
Who am I to them?


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on Jun. 2 2010 at 8:54 pm
Pitiful_Anonymous PLATINUM, New Cumberland, West Virginia
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Favorite Quote:
"and all you f***ers go beep beep beep in cheap,plastic cars. If It's to dumb to see or say you'll still sing it, and I'll just cue the applause" - Marilyn Manson

Okay, so i liked this alot... the thing is, unlike your other poems, this one didn't really set off any emotions for me.... maybe it's because I've never taken the time to wonder what I am to other people... I dunno.

 

You represented your message clearly, and in a very thought provoking way, but again this one, or me, is like a step behind the others.

 

It's alright though, because everybody has atleast one of these. ;)


maRAWR GOLD said...
on May. 5 2010 at 2:14 pm
maRAWR GOLD, Greeley, Colorado
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Favorite Quote:
"all you need is love" -the beatles =)

like this one too!


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