Invisible

April 5, 2010
By Ebony_Rose PLATINUM, Hot Springs, Arkansas
Ebony_Rose PLATINUM, Hot Springs, Arkansas
21 articles 0 photos 54 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The simplest way that i can understand therapy is that we're born a certain
way, we're taught to be something different, and we spend our whole lives
trying to unravel it and ultimately align ourselves with who we really are." ~Billy Corgan


Bubbles float slowly
towards the sun,
formed by the soapy film
and the air that passed
through my lips.

I watch as they go
higher and higher,
the colors of reflecting light
fading as they begin to
blend with the bright blue sky.

Then they dissapear,
invisible in the sea of azure.
Whoe knows if they're
even still there?
Invisible and then they're gone.

The author's comments:
My boyfriend (ex boyfriend now) ignored me for about a week and I just thought of bubbles.

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on Sep. 27 2011 at 2:36 pm
Kev-Girl SILVER, Plymouth, Indiana
5 articles 0 photos 86 comments

Favorite Quote:
Life is a maybe. Death is for sure. Sin is the cause. Christ is the cure. :)

Love is the breath of God, and prayer is the melody that makes it sing.

If you cant annoy someone, there's no point in writing.

Love is overrated, marry for money.

This is a very creative idea, and I agree with the other two comments! I love how it was just kinda random, right? lol nice job!

on Nov. 2 2010 at 6:11 pm
summerdreamer PLATINUM, Chapel Hill, North Carolina
28 articles 15 photos 44 comments

Favorite Quote:
" Love isn't about loving someone who's perfect, it's about loving someone perfectly."
- I dont know who came up with it, I just saw it somewhere on facebook hehe

same here, its pretty good but if you just added a bit more it would be awesome, the bubble ideas creative

on May. 5 2010 at 12:38 pm
AlexandraVasari PLATINUM, Fort Stewart, Georgia
28 articles 4 photos 174 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Writing songs is super intimate. It's a bit like getting naked"~ Gwen Stefani

it's not bad, but i think you could add more, honestly it seems kind of too safe but i think you could make it a lot deeper of a poem,it's a cool idea, i did like how you used azure instead of blue:)


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