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Bubbles float slowly
towards the sun,
formed by the soapy film
and the air that passed
through my lips.

I watch as they go
higher and higher,
the colors of reflecting light
fading as they begin to
blend with the bright blue sky.

Then they dissapear,
invisible in the sea of azure.
Whoe knows if they're
even still there?
Invisible and then they're gone.



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Kev-GirlThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Sept. 27, 2011 at 2:36 pm:
This is a very creative idea, and I agree with the other two comments! I love how it was just kinda random, right? lol nice job!
 
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HeronHero said...
May 5, 2010 at 12:38 pm:
it's not bad, but i think you could add more, honestly it seems kind of too safe but i think you could make it a lot deeper of a poem,it's a cool idea, i did like how you used azure instead of blue:)
 
summerdreamer This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Nov. 2, 2010 at 6:11 pm :
same here, its pretty good but if you just added a bit more it would be awesome, the bubble ideas creative
 
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