The Mistake

April 7, 2010
By Goofy GOLD, Littleton, Colorado
Goofy GOLD, Littleton, Colorado
10 articles 1 photo 10 comments

The mother ran towards the river
With her mistake in her arms
It cries as if knowing its fate
She bends down to the river and releases the mistake
She watches the mistake drowned
Through the tears in her eyes
She watches the bubbles and wonders
“Was that the mistake?”



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on May. 3 2010 at 6:01 pm
robertservis GOLD, Brownsmills, New Jersey
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Favorite Quote:
if you get to the end of your rope, tie a knot and hang on tight- Teddy roosevelt lol my favorite president :)

wow man, nice, very haunting :D

on May. 2 2010 at 10:39 am
Um, well I agree with princess87m that it is kinda all over the place. I don't really get the meaning of the poem, and I think you had some word mistakes, but other than that it really was a good poem. The picture you chose really fit well. Good job!

princess87m said...
on Apr. 30 2010 at 8:44 pm
Hey! wow nice poem! i like it but i think u made it sound too out there and all over the place, i am in creative writing so ... but its good!


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