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Was It Dream?

April 14, 2010
By Vania BRONZE, Philadelphia, Pennsylvania
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Vania BRONZE, Philadelphia, Pennsylvania
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closing my eyes
a loud voice shattered the windows
deaf wall with eyes around
let me die
each tear that drops in my heart
stabbed my soul
why did i let it happen so easily?
so easily
seem to find the carbon of night in my shadow
wish I had more power to stop it
why oh why?
killed so deep inside
i could smell it
could hardly feel it
i knew it... i knew it
just didn't believe it
my body was filled with grief
so useless
like the old tree
rest on a river

© Katie S., Vineland, NJ

The author's comments:
I wrote this poem because I want to tell other not to listen to anybody's advice when they know they can do something because some people are just jealous.
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