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The War of Heartbreak

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The shining darkness
Illuminates my shame
Again and again
Trespassing angels and
Cherished demons
Are warring inside me
One side a blinding, infuriating light
The other a calming embrace of darkness
Which side will gain control of my heart?
I think the darkness
Already has



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S.S.D.D. said...
May 17, 2010 at 1:57 pm:
i dont care what anyone else says on here you have talent and dont waste it on what other people think do it for yourself and anyone who tries to tell you otherwise doesnt understand what poetry really is good job my question is what inspired you to write this but yeah let your potentail shine and remember have fun
 
Yalith replied...
May 19, 2010 at 8:27 am :
I was inspired to write this after the girl I love told me there was no chance for us. (I'm a girl too, btw) It actually started out as a song inspired by the lyrics of Evanescence's songs, but I ended up using it for this.
 
S.S.D.D. replied...
May 19, 2010 at 2:38 pm :
i know your pain thats what inspired me on most of my songs you really are good though my newest one is pushed away it has yet to be accepted though my most recent break up
 
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Leilah said...
May 11, 2010 at 8:46 am:
That was pretty good keep trying.  You'll eventually get much better.
 
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