Reflection (long version)

April 6, 2010
By VampiericRain GOLD, Amarillo, Texas
VampiericRain GOLD, Amarillo, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
Would you like a side of epic with that fail?


Istare at my reflection
and start to wonder.
Am I the real one
or are you?

Are you the one
making me move,
making faces,
or am I making you?

Am I the one
who stares
until we both blink
or are you?

Or maybe
someone else is
moving us both,
but how?

Your copying
my every move
or am I the one
copying you?

I guess
we'll never know
which one of us
is the real me.

I watch as you
stare at me
and put your hand
against the mirror.

All I can feel,
is the smooth glass
beneath my palm.
Do you feel the same?


The author's comments:
This is the longer version. I like the shorter one better, but I thought you all might like to know the longer one too.

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k.james SILVER said...
on May. 11 2010 at 6:28 pm
k.james SILVER, Whitby, Other
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Favorite Quote:
"Love without action is meaningless, action without love is irrelevant." -Deepak Chopra

No problem :)

on May. 11 2010 at 3:56 pm
VampiericRain GOLD, Amarillo, Texas
12 articles 0 photos 137 comments

Favorite Quote:
Would you like a side of epic with that fail?

Thanks! :)

k.james SILVER said...
on May. 11 2010 at 3:29 pm
k.james SILVER, Whitby, Other
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Favorite Quote:
"Love without action is meaningless, action without love is irrelevant." -Deepak Chopra

Love the descriptive details :)

on Apr. 30 2010 at 4:24 pm
talia_is_happy GOLD, Amarillo, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
"The people who mind- don't matter, and the people who matter- don't mind."
-Dr. Seuss

Your poems are so easy to imagine, you know?


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