March 26, 2010
By storymaster BRONZE, Corning, California
storymaster BRONZE, Corning, California
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Favorite Quote:
"To achieve excellence one must strive to push the limit"

I’m stuck in a web of chaos, drowning in a puddle of love, my breath is turning into bubbles, as I slowly can feel sadness fill up my lungs, all I can see is the darkness that is leading me into the unknown, my body is being consumed slowly but painfully, I can barley hear my heart beat as it gently becomes slower and slower, the feeling of devastation swallows my whole soul, my heartbeat has stopped and I am now one of the many victims of the river of the heartbroken!

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tina rose said...
on May. 1 2010 at 7:09 pm
very good figurative language!!

kayla11 said...
on May. 1 2010 at 7:07 pm


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