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the tears bulid up in my eyes and then slowly roll down my face and down the curvature of my cheek and drips off the end of my chin

it feels like ive cried a river but my tears are gone and i havent smiled in days because crying is the sign of weakness so instead of crying i run... run... run.. i never let anyone know what is bothering me i just fade away int the darkness...




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Free.2.Write.Forever.This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Jun. 15, 2012 at 10:24 am:

Love it Hex! Great work! :D

 

~Free :)(:

 
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-Ash-This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Feb. 5, 2012 at 10:19 pm:
amazing poem! i can totally relate, 5 stars :)
 
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CarrieAnn13This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Dec. 17, 2011 at 8:14 pm:

I have a bit of criticism.

1.  Your grammar.  Please, please, please work on it.

Other than that, good job!  I love the message behind your poem.

 
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Mudder_Hacky said...
Aug. 19, 2011 at 10:54 am:

how true this is... i've gotta say, i've felt like this before, as i'm sure all teens have, and i'm just... well...

kudos to you for going with run-ons for this poem. there is no better way to write that than scrambling rambling sentences.

 
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THEIMPACT77 said...
Jul. 30, 2011 at 11:48 am:
this is a totally awesome piece.
 
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