tears

March 26, 2010
By Hexenbiest SILVER, Winona, Ohio
Hexenbiest SILVER, Winona, Ohio
5 articles 0 photos 8 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Hope is the worst of evils, for it prolongs the torments of man."
"You don't really understand human nature unless you know why a child on a merry-go-round will wave at his parents every time around -- and why his parents will always wave back."
Life is a game, play it....Life is too precious, do not destroy it."
"Experience is a brutal teacher, but you learn. My God, do you learn."


the tears bulid up in my eyes and then slowly roll down my face and down the curvature of my cheek and drips off the end of my chin

it feels like ive cried a river but my tears are gone and i havent smiled in days because crying is the sign of weakness so instead of crying i run... run... run.. i never let anyone know what is bothering me i just fade away int the darkness...


The author's comments:
this pice hs to do with things like teens lives and what they go through

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on Jun. 15 2012 at 10:24 am
Free_One PLATINUM, ????, Ohio
40 articles 1 photo 773 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I am not invincible or unstoppable, but I stay strong because it is the only way to survive in this world."

Love it Hex! Great work! :D

 

~Free :)(:


-Ash- SILVER said...
on Feb. 5 2012 at 10:19 pm
-Ash- SILVER, Redmond, Washington
7 articles 4 photos 49 comments

Favorite Quote:
She wants to die. She wants to disappear, to be remembered no more. She wants so terribly to be forgotten, all her mistakes, all her failures, everything. Her name to be wiped free from all record of existence. Because is it really existing when you’ve got nothing to show for your life?

amazing poem! i can totally relate, 5 stars :)

on Dec. 17 2011 at 8:14 pm
CarrieAnn13 GOLD, Goodsoil, Other
12 articles 10 photos 1648 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I love deadlines. I like the whooshing sound they make as they fly by." --Douglas Adams

"The object of life is not to be on the side of the majority, but to escape finding oneself in the ranks of the insane." --Marcus Aurelius

I have a bit of criticism.

1.  Your grammar.  Please, please, please work on it.

Other than that, good job!  I love the message behind your poem.


on Aug. 19 2011 at 10:54 am
Mudder_Hacky SILVER, Fowlerville, Michigan
8 articles 0 photos 85 comments

how true this is... i've gotta say, i've felt like this before, as i'm sure all teens have, and i'm just... well...

kudos to you for going with run-ons for this poem. there is no better way to write that than scrambling rambling sentences.


on Jul. 30 2011 at 11:48 am
THEIMPACT77 BRONZE, Florence, Kentucky
4 articles 0 photos 22 comments

Favorite Quote:
I WILL NOT BOW

this is a totally awesome piece.


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