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Aspiring Allegiance

April 2, 2010
By bahbahbahrooooke. SILVER, Lumberton, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
“An eye for eye only ends up making the whole world blind.”

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The wind blows
The sun glows
The fire goes out
The air goes about
I wish I may
I wish I might
That the stars
will answer
my wish tonight

© Daniel H., Durham, NC

The author's comments:
I wrote this in a time that i was wishing that my mom would let me just relax, it was random and once i was done i realized the signifigance it had on my life (: Hope you like it <3
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rainlover1994 SILVER said...
on Apr. 29 2010 at 3:40 pm
rainlover1994 SILVER, Raleigh, North Carolina
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Favorite Quote:
"When you get to the end of your rope, tie a knot and hang on."

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I really do like it and I feel it is very easy to relate to. If only all random thoughts could be condensed and written down in such a beautiful manner :)

Please check out some of my writing if you get the chance.

 

lifeisajourney GOLD said...
on Apr. 28 2010 at 5:52 pm
lifeisajourney GOLD, Coronado, California
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Favorite Quote:
"Life is a journey not a destination..."
"Perhaps our eyes need to be washed by our tears once in a while, so that we can see life in a clearer view again."
"Only those who will go too far, can possibly find out how far one can go"

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I totally get what u mean i like it a lot keep writing