March 31, 2010
By GabeLikesCandy BRONZE, Salem, Ohio
GabeLikesCandy BRONZE, Salem, Ohio
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I am all alone.
I wander through the abyss,
forlorn, and distruaght.
I search for anybody.
With no luck, I die alone.

The author's comments:
I originally wrote this Tanka in my English class yesterday morning.
It was for an assignment, that turned out well.
The first copy was way better, but I forget exactly how it went, so I tweaked it a bit, but, it still follows the rules of a Tanka.
I am new to writing poetry, so it's not too good.

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