Sounds Like Goodbye

March 30, 2010
Your face looks like it's leaving
Your eyes move like they're gone
And though we've yet to say hello
Your voice sounds like goodbye

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Ekko! said...
Apr. 30, 2010 at 7:30 pm
I really like this, and thatnks for the comment on my poem! this is really good keep writing!
enchanted4yu replied...
May 1, 2010 at 12:04 am
Thank you! And yourwelcome =)
Metree This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Apr. 26, 2010 at 11:33 am
wow i really like this! short and sweet :)
enchanted4yu replied...
May 1, 2010 at 12:03 am
Thank you, that means a lot to me that you like it.
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