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Sounds Like Goodbye

March 30, 2010
By enchanted4yu PLATINUM, Calabasas, California
enchanted4yu PLATINUM, Calabasas, California
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Favorite Quote:
"Don't tell me the sky is the limit when there are footprints on the moon"


Your face looks like it's leaving
Your eyes move like they're gone
And though we've yet to say hello
Your voice sounds like goodbye



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on May. 1 2010 at 12:04 am
enchanted4yu PLATINUM, Calabasas, California
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Favorite Quote:
"Don't tell me the sky is the limit when there are footprints on the moon"

Thank you! And yourwelcome =)

on May. 1 2010 at 12:03 am
enchanted4yu PLATINUM, Calabasas, California
24 articles 0 photos 103 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Don't tell me the sky is the limit when there are footprints on the moon"

Thank you, that means a lot to me that you like it.

on Apr. 30 2010 at 7:30 pm
ohxXxEkkoxXx GOLD, Sanatoga, Pennsylvania
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I really like this, and thatnks for the comment on my poem! this is really good keep writing!

Metree SILVER said...
on Apr. 26 2010 at 11:33 am
Metree SILVER, Machipongo, Virginia
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wow i really like this! short and sweet :)