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Colours in your eye

March 13, 2010
By OnyxDivine PLATINUM, Scarborough, Other
OnyxDivine PLATINUM, Scarborough, Other
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Favorite Quote:
"Take chances"
"never regret something that made you smile"
"Forever isn't infinity. It's the time two people spent together, be it a few seconds, five minutes, an hour, days, months, or more."


Green
In the spring when flowers bloom,
Everything comes to life,
After a winter of gloom.
The colour of grassy fields
We ran on and laid on.
The shade of new sprung leaves,
Awaken after so long.

Brown
Heaven’s delicacy
Dessert that melts in my mouth,
and I reach for more, guilty.
The fur on my favourite teddy
I keep beside my pillows.
The initials you carved
On the bark of the willow.

Blue
When the sky is clear,
No clouds in sight,
And the breeze in my hair.
Waves slapping against the shore
Horizon extends to infinity.
Skipping stones and seagulls,
Keep us company.


Gold
Sunset on a summer day,
Right before the stars twinkle,
Signalling the end of play.
Your hand in mine,
Crunching autumn leaves,
Shades of changing seasons,
Just beneath our feet.

Gray
Misty air and morning dew.
Nowhere is the sun, I find
Grass stains on my shoes.
Daunting clouds loom,
High above our heads.
The coming storm,
The rain, we love, we dread.

Hypnosis,
The colour I can’t name,
Frustrating, aggravating,
So it’s you whom I blame.
Mesmerized, whenever
You look at me that way,
Rooted on the spot,
Wishing this is how we stay.


Hazel
Intriguing and captivating,
Soft and intense,
Feels like I’m dreaming.
Colours mix and shine like
A multi-faceted gem,
Like all the sides of you,
I can’t help but think, Je t’aime.



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on Jun. 25 2010 at 4:34 pm
OnyxDivine PLATINUM, Scarborough, Other
22 articles 0 photos 18 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Take chances"
"never regret something that made you smile"
"Forever isn't infinity. It's the time two people spent together, be it a few seconds, five minutes, an hour, days, months, or more."

Hey, thanks so much for commenting! Its hard to get feedback with so many good works on this site so i really appreciate it!

on Jun. 24 2010 at 6:28 pm
Egyptiangirl13 GOLD, Kansas City, Missouri
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Favorite Quote:
\"either write something worth reading or do something worth writing. -Benjamin Franklin

\"If columbus would have turned back, no one would have blamed him. No one would have remembered him either.\"

\"If music be the food of love, play on.\"

wow this poem is amazing!!! i absolutley one of the best poems i read on this site!!! the best are hard to find, but i'm so happy i found yours!! you can tell that there is more to this poem and it keeps me interested-its so well written with a great flow that it is music to my ears!!! :) awesome job!!! please check out some of my work if you get the chance:) (it would mean a lot!)

on May. 20 2010 at 6:35 pm
OnyxDivine PLATINUM, Scarborough, Other
22 articles 0 photos 18 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Take chances"
"never regret something that made you smile"
"Forever isn't infinity. It's the time two people spent together, be it a few seconds, five minutes, an hour, days, months, or more."

Thank you =)

The poem is actually inspired and French is one of the things I'm very interested in, plus it has a personal connection ;)

Thanks for your feedback!


on May. 19 2010 at 9:05 pm
NeverEnding... GOLD, Northeast, Maryland
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Favorite Quote:
"It was as if you had died and no one came to your funeral"
"Whenever i see you i burst apart and scatter the sky with my blazing heart"
"If we can't be happy, maybe we shouldn't be together"
"Right and wrong have ceased to mean much to me"

!!! i love this :] i use french in my poems and stories too! lol thats so cool and your poem has an irresistable flow to it, the words dance in my mouth :]