The Doctor

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The beast walks towards me
The needle in his hand.
My parents on both sides of me
telling me it would be okay.
I start to cry afraid of the needle,
I close my eyes and feel a pinch.
Was that it?
Was that all?
I open my eyes and saw the bead of blood.
That was it!
That was nothing!
I walk away unafraid and happy.
That was nothing!





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inksplatters21 said...
Aug. 9, 2010 at 7:56 pm
Haha, I totally agree!  And by the way, I LOVE Hunger Games too!  So excited for April 24th!
 
Challenger101 said...
May 2, 2010 at 10:47 am
LOVE IT!!! FIVE OUT OF FIVE STARS ON THAT ONE!!!! Hey, it looks like you've got the hang of writing poems now! I love that one-maybe because it's longer? Wow, very great job I love how you describe the doctor as a beast. You remind me of me at the doctors. Lots of description!!! Keep going that was great!!! ♥♥♥
 
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