Take another look

March 29, 2010
By Allykattz PLATINUM, Rehoboth, Massachusetts
Allykattz PLATINUM, Rehoboth, Massachusetts
45 articles 1 photo 43 comments

Favorite Quote:
"This much I know is true That God blessed the broken road That led me straight to you"-Rascal Flatts


Eyes red from crying
I walk down the hall
Head up high
Yet I still feel so small
Everyone wonders but no one does ask
Why it is that my tears do last but
If they were to just take another look
I’m sure they would see
Just how strong I’m trying to be
With my heart breaking inside her chest
You better believe I’m trying her best

If they were to take another look
I’m sure they could guess
Why it is my heart beats in distress
Keeping it all together is harder than it seems
Especially when the past fills my dreams
If they were to take another look
I’m sure they would see
That my heart is locked for it is he who holds the key

But he’s changed and won’t look back to the past
Even though he knows it ended too fast
If he were to take another look
He could give you a clue
Of why it is my heart is in two
But he won’t even give me a single glance
Because he doesn’t want to give us a second chance
In my heart I want to believe
That it is not his desire to make me grieve
But if I was to take another look
I’m sure I would be able to see
That he knows exactly what he’s doing to me


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on May. 16 2010 at 5:15 pm
JohnDeereGirl DIAMOND, Westerlo, New York
61 articles 36 photos 216 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I'd rather be hated for who I am, than loved for who I'm not"
"Somewhere betweeen us talking, you saying I deserve better, and you making me laugh when I wanted to cry, I fell in love with you."

Deffanitly emotional. I love it and can completely feel it as I read it.

on Apr. 23 2010 at 10:12 am
Allykattz PLATINUM, Rehoboth, Massachusetts
45 articles 1 photo 43 comments

Favorite Quote:
"This much I know is true That God blessed the broken road That led me straight to you"-Rascal Flatts

Thank you! If you enjoyed this poem I guarentee that you would enjoy some of my others! Take a look and let me know what you think.

on Apr. 23 2010 at 9:40 am
HeatherBee BRONZE, I Live In, Texas
1 article 0 photos 1985 comments

Favorite Quote:
Go on and try to tear me down. I will be rising from the ground, like a skyscraper

Love is louder than the pressure to be perfect

that was emotionally amazingly beautiful!!! that was powerful, gooood job!!!!!!!!!!


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