Monster

March 29, 2010
By Allykattz PLATINUM, Rehoboth, Massachusetts
Allykattz PLATINUM, Rehoboth, Massachusetts
45 articles 1 photo 43 comments

Favorite Quote:
"This much I know is true That God blessed the broken road That led me straight to you"-Rascal Flatts


Whispers warned me that I should stay away
Each reciting things you wanted them to say
Trying to ward off anyone who might come around
By keeping up the pretense by which you were bound
No one knew if your elaborate anecdotes were true
But either way they relayed what you wanted them to

A monster is what you claimed to be
Disappointment is what you promised to me
Except your deep blue eyes told me it was nothing but a mask
From that moment on unveiling you was to be my task
I had no idea the extend of what I was about to discover
But I knew I had to rid you of the charade you used as a cover

You resisted my friendship not wanting to fall for temptation
Nevertheless you were soon yearning for my adoration
Pledging to end your fiendish ways if I was by your side
I hesitantly agreed hoping you would honor the conditions applied
You swore to never make a promise you knew you could not keep
The faulty wording never fazed me until I was already in too deep

Apologies and alibis became the broken record of our debates
My heart broke as I finally began to comprehend the straits
A final blow led to the demise of my remaining devotion
You didn’t seem to care but I know that was a conditioned emotion
For so long I blamed you for raising havoc on my heart
But you warned me that you were a monster from the start

Seemingly the days and weeks dragged on now for much longer
Since you had now moved away I thought I would soon grow stronger
Ultimately time went by like it always seems to do
Still not once did I receive any word from you
Eventually I was pushed along as the tide does to a stone
Never imagining that you would come back to atone

The disguise now gone the man I always saw finally sees the light of day
Now asking for my forgiveness I have so many things to say
Past pain and past passion evoke memories to try to make their plea
But I already know that the man inside the monster will always own a piece of me


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on May. 11 2010 at 8:42 pm
Allykattz PLATINUM, Rehoboth, Massachusetts
45 articles 1 photo 43 comments

Favorite Quote:
"This much I know is true That God blessed the broken road That led me straight to you"-Rascal Flatts

Thank you so much! You comments are truly appreciated :)

on May. 11 2010 at 2:09 pm
chargertien GOLD, Forest Hill, Maryland
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Favorite Quote:
Life sucks and is unfair. But when a melody dances in the wind, stop and enjoy the peacefulness.

Another great poem and such a strong messege. This is what poetry was made for.

on May. 2 2010 at 12:50 pm
Allykattz PLATINUM, Rehoboth, Massachusetts
45 articles 1 photo 43 comments

Favorite Quote:
"This much I know is true That God blessed the broken road That led me straight to you"-Rascal Flatts

Thank you, this is one of the poems i can truly say i am very proud of. Check out my other work and tell me what you think :)

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on Apr. 26 2010 at 12:05 pm
Metree SILVER, Machipongo, Virginia
6 articles 0 photos 20 comments

This is really good! Good language- can tell you worked hard on it and spent time :)

Love it!


on Apr. 24 2010 at 9:57 am
Allykattz PLATINUM, Rehoboth, Massachusetts
45 articles 1 photo 43 comments

Favorite Quote:
"This much I know is true That God blessed the broken road That led me straight to you"-Rascal Flatts

Thank You :)

on Apr. 23 2010 at 10:30 am
HeatherBee BRONZE, I Live In, Texas
1 article 0 photos 1985 comments

Favorite Quote:
Go on and try to tear me down. I will be rising from the ground, like a skyscraper

Love is louder than the pressure to be perfect

you are a verryy talented writer, my friend:D


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