Ur Rippin' Me Apart

March 29, 2010
By Crystal Kimble BRONZE, Long Beach, California
Crystal Kimble BRONZE, Long Beach, California
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Ur Rippin’ Me Apart

Before U came, the triangle
Never broke
We were bonded and melded
As one
But as the 2 pushed U
The one got weak and
Embraced you
And now you are ripping us
The worst feelings of helplessness
The greatest pain has rested
In my heart
The vision of heaven fades
And the nightmare of
Loneliness has started my hero
Has been defeated by you
And now what can I do, watch
As you destroy us
And our love is finally through
I know the worst is here
I feel it in my heart
You got into the circle
Now ur rippin’ me apart

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on Mar. 11 2011 at 5:35 pm
Basketball23 SILVER, Pine Grove, Pennsylvania
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Favorite Quote:
"I'm living in a shell with no soul" -Three Days Grace (World So Cold)
"Time still turns the pages of the book it's burned" -Avenged Sevenfold (So Far Away)

This is really good!!!  Keep writing!!!


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