what really is love

March 29, 2010
By Hexenbiest SILVER, Winona, Ohio
Hexenbiest SILVER, Winona, Ohio
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Favorite Quote:
"Hope is the worst of evils, for it prolongs the torments of man."
"You don't really understand human nature unless you know why a child on a merry-go-round will wave at his parents every time around -- and why his parents will always wave back."
Life is a game, play it....Life is too precious, do not destroy it."
"Experience is a brutal teacher, but you learn. My God, do you learn."


what is LOVE anyways, is it a feeling, or a thought or a sign, i dont know
people think that teens dont understand the speciatly of love but some do and some dont ,
your heart has to be broken atleast once to find your true love .......just tell me one thing what is love


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it just came to mind

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on Dec. 17 2011 at 8:13 pm
CarrieAnn13 GOLD, Goodsoil, Other
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Favorite Quote:
"I love deadlines. I like the whooshing sound they make as they fly by." --Douglas Adams

"The object of life is not to be on the side of the majority, but to escape finding oneself in the ranks of the insane." --Marcus Aurelius

Okay, I have a bit of criticism.

1.  Please work on your grammar.  'anyways' is incorrect, you're missing apostrophes, you're missing punctuation and when you do have punctuation, it is incorrect.

2.  I think you could expand this idea a bit more, but that's more of a personal preference anyway.

This poem has a lot of potential, so keep writing!


on Aug. 19 2011 at 10:55 am
Mudder_Hacky SILVER, Fowlerville, Michigan
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can u please post more??? i love ur poems :3

on Aug. 19 2011 at 10:52 am
Mudder_Hacky SILVER, Fowlerville, Michigan
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how true... u really can't fall in love - or even know what it is, i suppose - until u've been broken at least once. or maybe just once...

 

i saw an engagement card recently, and as i have also wondered "What is love??" I was intrigued by this. It was like, in the form of a dictionary entry. There were eight, let's see how many I can remember.

1. When you're holding hands and walking in the rain, and you don't even notice that it's raining.

2. ALWAYS being there for each other.

3. that look.

4. passion.

5. ... nope. that's it. that's all i can remember :(

if i had had money with me, i so totally would have bought that...


on Apr. 1 2011 at 9:32 pm
morethanunusual BRONZE, Metuchen, New Jersey
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liked it, wish it was longer though...

on Mar. 29 2011 at 9:25 pm
Beachgirl1 PLATINUM, Bellevue, Washington
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Favorite Quote:
"If You Don't Fight Back, You've Already Lost."
"Don't suppress Laughter, it goes to your thighs."

nice, i like the topic, intriguring, i like the way you wrote it, and really, what is love?


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