what really is love

By Hexenbiest, Winona, OH

what is LOVE anyways, is it a feeling, or a thought or a sign, i dont know
people think that teens dont understand the speciatly of love but some do and some dont ,
your heart has to be broken atleast once to find your true love .......just tell me one thing what is love

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CarrieAnn13 said...
Dec. 17, 2011 at 8:13 pm:

Okay, I have a bit of criticism.

1. Please work on your grammar. 'anyways' is incorrect, you're missing apostrophes, you're missing punctuation and when you do have punctuation, it is incorrect.

2. I think you could expand this idea a bit more, but that's more of a personal preference anyway.

This poem has a lot of potential, so keep writing!

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Mudder_Hacky said...
Aug. 19, 2011 at 10:52 am:

how true... u really can't fall in love - or even know what it is, i suppose - until u've been broken at least once. or maybe just once...

i saw an engagement card recently, and as i have also wondered "What is love??" I was intrigued by this. It was like, in the form of a dictionary entry. There were eight, let's see how many I can remember.

1. When you're holding hands and walking in the rain, and you don't even notice that it's raining.

2. ALWAYS being th... (more »)

Mudder_Hacky replied...
Aug. 19, 2011 at 10:55 am :

can u please post more??? i love ur poems :3

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morethanunusual said...
Apr. 1, 2011 at 9:32 pm:

liked it, wish it was longer though...

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beach said...
Mar. 29, 2011 at 9:25 pm:

nice, i like the topic, intriguring, i like the way you wrote it, and really, what is love?