My Heart In Written Form

March 28, 2010
By AngelForeverBleedingLove DIAMOND, Frederic, Wisconsin
AngelForeverBleedingLove DIAMOND, Frederic, Wisconsin
66 articles 3 photos 248 comments

Favorite Quote:
You say you don't remember,
But I will never forget


Why does my heart skip a beat whenever you cross my mind?

I apologize, my heart's defective,
For it's been broken many times you see
So many nights of crying and heartache
So many times it has fallen and hit the floor
And been smashed into shards of glass
I've tried so hard to carefully piece them together
But my fragile heart as of yet is not complete
It's full of holes and there's so many cracks
As if one jolt or just one touch
Could send it flying back to it's box, labeled:
"Some small parts, not for children under three", and
"Some assembly required", "Batteries not included".
I just can find those missing pieces
They must've been swept up and thrown away
But I'll take a chance and live for today,
Brush off the hurt and shake off the pain
To get down on one knee and give you my heart
Show you my soul and forget all my doubt

"I love you now, and I always will"

A single blue tear falls from his eye
Shining like glass on a newly- shined window
It lands on my heart and all the holes are gone.

"I love you too."


The author's comments:
I feel like writing my heart out was really helpful... But I want everyone to know that this poem is me. I wrote it in free-verse, and I know it might not flow correctly or it might not all be right, but this is my heart. This is my soul. Take it or leave it, this is me.

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on May. 30 2010 at 9:07 am
BleedingRose PLATINUM, Frederic, Wisconsin
33 articles 1 photo 378 comments

Favorite Quote:
*The darkness holds infinite possibilities.

(mine)

of course, your poems are AMAZING!   :) :) :)  keep it up, angel!  :D

on May. 25 2010 at 8:15 am
AngelForeverBleedingLove DIAMOND, Frederic, Wisconsin
66 articles 3 photos 248 comments

Favorite Quote:
You say you don't remember,
But I will never forget

Thanks rose! I really like how you read all of my work!

-angel


on May. 14 2010 at 10:25 am
BleedingRose PLATINUM, Frederic, Wisconsin
33 articles 1 photo 378 comments

Favorite Quote:
*The darkness holds infinite possibilities.

(mine)

Aweseome sauce, I love this Angel!  very deep, so one of my faves now!  luv ya

-Rose 


on May. 1 2010 at 2:23 pm
sunkissed-devil14 SILVER, Battle Lake, Minnesota
9 articles 0 photos 5 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I believe in everything until it's disproved. So I believe in fairies, the myths, dragons. It all exists, even if it's in your mind. Who's to say that dreams and nightmares aren't as real as the here and now?"~John Lennon

haha yeah i typed this and i was like.. umm i wonder if she'll know this is me. yeah good times ;)

on Apr. 29 2010 at 10:17 am
AngelForeverBleedingLove DIAMOND, Frederic, Wisconsin
66 articles 3 photos 248 comments

Favorite Quote:
You say you don't remember,
But I will never forget

omg, thanks! i was sitting here thinking.... "do i know you???!" but then i realized! lolz i luv u cuzzin!

-angel


on Apr. 27 2010 at 7:52 pm
sunkissed-devil14 SILVER, Battle Lake, Minnesota
9 articles 0 photos 5 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I believe in everything until it's disproved. So I believe in fairies, the myths, dragons. It all exists, even if it's in your mind. Who's to say that dreams and nightmares aren't as real as the here and now?"~John Lennon

wow, this is soo amazing, love!! idk if it will let me post this because i forgot my password and username sooooooo just so you know its ur cuzzin here and this touched me so deeply! i love your work!!




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