Would You?

March 28, 2010
Wait a minute.
For me.
I need to ask you
before I get
that I already
It's really
not too hard,
just a simple yes or
It's been on my mind for
a long time
I've been
waiting for the right moment
to ask you.
I just need to know
one thing.
And don't worry about
what your answer might
to me.
I just need to know
If I asked you to
smile at me,
walk with me,
hold hands with me,
talk to me,
laugh with me,
listen to me,
hug me,
hold me,
kiss me...
If I asked you to love me...

Would you?

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maybeshannon said...
Jun. 8, 2010 at 10:12 pm
hahah funny the chick's name on the photo credit is shannon too =]P
maybeshannon said...
Apr. 20, 2010 at 9:22 pm
can't believe i have an error on the first poem i publish.  dang.  ok well on that likne up there that says "before i get higher that i already am," the "that" is supposed to be "than."  oops.  anyways hope you like it!
possiblylindsey This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Apr. 21, 2010 at 9:53 pm
haha shannon =]P fail.  its so weird to see your words all typed up, cause i can practically HEAR you saying them =] haha but i totally love it
maybeshannon replied...
Apr. 22, 2010 at 7:18 pm
wow.  i misspelled a word on the comment i wrote to correct a misspelled word.  something is wrong with me lol.  and gracias linzz hehehe no need to worry bout this one no more =]
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