An Open Heart

March 8, 2010
By AshlynSerora BRONZE, Riverview, Florida
AshlynSerora BRONZE, Riverview, Florida
4 articles 0 photos 13 comments

Favorite Quote:
Always found in ink wells and paper hearts..


Morning brought rain
When night brought laughter.
Every heart opens to one another,
Or maybe just two.
The moon and the stars played fair,
Keeping together what didn’t want to be lost.
And the dawn’s calmness,
With it’s gentle rain spilling on soft skin,
Nestled itself deep within a heart
Open to all and closed to all but one.
But what will the one do now?
When the heart is finally able,
Maybe it’s too late?
Where is the one now?
Separated by a distinguishable gap,
Dear one,
Will you stay or act or go?
This heart grows stronger,
And yet, drinks in your sight.
To see what hadn’t been seen before,
And to regret having been blind.
A ruthless irony, and a sad wish,
For an open heart to miss it’s one.



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Jess95 GOLD said...
on Jun. 15 2010 at 8:54 pm
Jess95 GOLD, Morgan Hill, California
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Favorite Quote:
If I were you I'd promise to live life for all it's worth, take all you've been given and leave your mark upon this Earth. Trust your heart to show you everything you need...and if you were you, I'd fall in love with me. -unknown


fear not, for I am with you;


be not dismayed, for I am your God;

I will strengthen you, I will help you,


I will uphold you with my righteous right hand.
(Isaiah 41:10 ESV)

When i read this poem, I read the words but i'm not seeing them...I'm seeing the picture that your words paint...I visualise this poem as it unfolds the truth of love, and the moment when you get caught up in it...well thats what i think of when  read it...the poem is beautiful...luv it.

on Apr. 21 2010 at 7:30 am
AshlynSerora BRONZE, Riverview, Florida
4 articles 0 photos 13 comments

Favorite Quote:
Always found in ink wells and paper hearts..

thank you so much!!! ^^

on Apr. 20 2010 at 6:16 pm
HeatherBee BRONZE, I Live In, Texas
1 article 0 photos 1985 comments

Favorite Quote:
Go on and try to tear me down. I will be rising from the ground, like a skyscraper

Love is louder than the pressure to be perfect

oh i loveeeed it!!!!!!!!!! seems like real emotion n meaningful thoughts wer put into this...


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