breathe

March 8, 2010
By secrets_of_silence GOLD, Gisborne, Other
secrets_of_silence GOLD, Gisborne, Other
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Favorite Quote:
life had i loved the more
had it but passed away
as quietly as the day
ebbs from the darkening star.


-emanuel litvinoff


Why
You cannot
Breathe
When you cannot see
The reason to live is
There is nothing-as in
You know there is
Nothing there you cant
See or hear or befriend-
Therefore you cant breathe
What isn't there......
I cannot breathe


The author's comments:
my cousin had been annoying and i was particularly paranoid that day!!

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on Aug. 11 2011 at 10:03 pm
cheetoz45680 DIAMOND, Bridgeport, Connecticut
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Favorite Quote:
Pain is inevitable, suffering is optional.

i like this

on Aug. 2 2011 at 5:34 pm
secrets_of_silence GOLD, Gisborne, Other
12 articles 0 photos 439 comments

Favorite Quote:
life had i loved the more
had it but passed away
as quietly as the day
ebbs from the darkening star.


-emanuel litvinoff

aww sorry bout that. its harsh isnt it

on May. 7 2010 at 6:01 am
Dunkelheitstieg BRONZE, Baldwin, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
"The poet ranks far below the painter in the representation of visible things, and far below the musician in that of invisible things. Why does the eye see a thing more clearly in dreams than the imagination when awake?,"Leonardo da Vinci.

Sorry bout the spelling i meant breathe. I do love your poem though.

on May. 7 2010 at 6:00 am
Dunkelheitstieg BRONZE, Baldwin, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
"The poet ranks far below the painter in the representation of visible things, and far below the musician in that of invisible things. Why does the eye see a thing more clearly in dreams than the imagination when awake?,"Leonardo da Vinci.

I also can't brathe and i feel like i'm under water.


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