When does it begin?"

March 8, 2010
By respecturself7 SILVER, Medina, New York
respecturself7 SILVER, Medina, New York
8 articles 0 photos 76 comments

Favorite Quote:
There is a natural law in life to settle.....I broke that law ~Katherine Hepburn
Love, Is the severest of mental diseases~U.K.
Spinning always spinning....when life puts me down I'll give you a call~respecturself7


Can you fix something in the midst
Of It's breaking?
Or must you wait
For complete desecration of the Soul,
Before you begin a Resurrection of
The broken and Tender spirit?

Can restoration of the weak begin
Now, as they fall apart? Or must
Every piece be torn away and every
Hope be dashed or fade?
Like a Flower it dies slowly till there's
Nothing left. A lifeless form lying
Still, and alone, and frail.


The author's comments:
I have to be inspired to write a poem, a good good one anyway. But I always carry a pen and pad of paper because you never know when that inspired moment might take place. I was at reunion with my family and there was no quiet place to sit. I ended up on the steps covering my ears and letting the words fight their way past the noise.

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on Jul. 13 2010 at 4:53 pm
respecturself7 SILVER, Medina, New York
8 articles 0 photos 76 comments

Favorite Quote:
There is a natural law in life to settle.....I broke that law ~Katherine Hepburn
Love, Is the severest of mental diseases~U.K.
Spinning always spinning....when life puts me down I'll give you a call~respecturself7

I said it once I'll say it again. almost all my poems are in a bit of a jumble due to idk I had them in the correct formate and when I submitted them they got messed up!

on Jul. 2 2010 at 3:45 pm
respecturself7 SILVER, Medina, New York
8 articles 0 photos 76 comments

Favorite Quote:
There is a natural law in life to settle.....I broke that law ~Katherine Hepburn
Love, Is the severest of mental diseases~U.K.
Spinning always spinning....when life puts me down I'll give you a call~respecturself7

P.S thanks also for your great perception. I don't write unless I can let myself slip into an emotion.

on Jul. 2 2010 at 3:43 pm
respecturself7 SILVER, Medina, New York
8 articles 0 photos 76 comments

Favorite Quote:
There is a natural law in life to settle.....I broke that law ~Katherine Hepburn
Love, Is the severest of mental diseases~U.K.
Spinning always spinning....when life puts me down I'll give you a call~respecturself7

Thanks so much! I really appreciate your support. Hopefully a few of my other poems will be posted soon, they take FOREVER to post stuff.

on Jul. 2 2010 at 1:45 am
Pitiful_Anonymous PLATINUM, New Cumberland, West Virginia
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Favorite Quote:
"and all you f***ers go beep beep beep in cheap,plastic cars. If It's to dumb to see or say you'll still sing it, and I'll just cue the applause" - Marilyn Manson

Full of emotion! i LOVE that! You have worked your way into my heart as a writer. :)

It's really great, and i can tell that this wasn't a fake "oh i'll write this to seem dark or cool" kind of thing, it's genuien (idk if thts right llol) and that's what makes it great. :)


BabyV GOLD said...
on Jun. 14 2010 at 9:44 pm
BabyV GOLD, Jachksoville, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
A really good poet write so that the reader can walk in their shoes just for that one minute. Victoria Jones

very deep, all your poems i have to always read them twice to get the message, but that what makes them sooooo good.

XCLover GOLD said...
on May. 30 2010 at 2:11 pm
XCLover GOLD, Sandpoint, Idaho
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Favorite Quote:
"I know I run like a girl, try and keep up!" ~Anon
"You only ever grow as a human being if you are outside your comfort zone." ~Percy Cerutti
"The hug is incomplete without you :3" NinjaMan

I need inspiration to write a decent poem as well. You are a good writer, keep it up.

on May. 21 2010 at 8:47 pm
just.be.me BRONZE, Dedham, Maine
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I really like all of the rhetorical questions in this!  It is really thought provoking!

on May. 21 2010 at 10:23 am
respecturself7 SILVER, Medina, New York
8 articles 0 photos 76 comments

Favorite Quote:
There is a natural law in life to settle.....I broke that law ~Katherine Hepburn
Love, Is the severest of mental diseases~U.K.
Spinning always spinning....when life puts me down I'll give you a call~respecturself7

Thank you!!!!!!!:)

on May. 21 2010 at 12:17 am
the_sky_is_blue GOLD, Reno, Nevada
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Favorite Quote:
"Become the change you want to see"-Mahatma Gandhi

Very thought provoking poem.  Once again, good job!

on May. 20 2010 at 10:13 am
sunnyhunny PLATINUM, Litchfield, New Hampshire
22 articles 3 photos 329 comments

Favorite Quote:
"An eye for an eye makes the whole world blind."
-Ghandi

Wow, I really like this and admire your dedication to your writing.

on May. 20 2010 at 7:37 am
HeatherBee BRONZE, I Live In, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
Go on and try to tear me down. I will be rising from the ground, like a skyscraper

Love is louder than the pressure to be perfect

i can tell ur emotions went into this:)))koool poem


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