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Without You

March 8, 2010
By xangielovex PLATINUM, Skillman, New Jersey
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Favorite Quote:
My heart is broken
My words are unspoken
My tears are saying all that needs to be said.
Thoughts and feelings through my head,
How dare you do what you've done to me?
How could one guy cause all this misery?

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I don't know
What I'm going to do
How will I ever survive
A full week alone
When I can hardly stand
Just a few hours?
Remember me
When I'm gone
Think of me sometimes
The universe has been too
Too fair to us
What a shame
It's all a dream
You're all I ever
Wanted in this world
Without you
Life is black, dark
Living off an Asprin OD
and my little white pills
I think of you
my heart aches
A few more hours
I'll be with you again
How can I go on
Can't see you
Can't smell you
Can't hear you
Just a faint memory
Just a dream

© Eva A., Eagle River, WI

The author's comments:
This is the old, crappy, unedited version of one of my latest poems I based on this. So yeah, peice of crap. For Johnny. Costa Rica over spring break so.. yeah.
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